Sunday, August 29, 2010

Young, black and enslaved



Phillis Wheatley




Phoebus remained her true god, the flambeau brought with

Her from Africa when she was ten years old.

In the dark of slavery, she was—without a doubt—

Lucky, for her master nurtured the flame of curiosity;

Lucky, for her Boston family illumined her—

In the home—with the edification of the word,

So she bloomed as a bright and reflective

Writer. Her poems sparkled with light.

Her poems illuminated those who read them.

Even Washington, warmed, beckoned her to Mount Vernon,

And she came and they talked unto emblazonment.

Then, after that talk, he allowed black soldiers to be

Let to serve their country, and at death, he freed his slaves.

Everything did not stay sublime: her husband passed, so darkened her last

Years of toil; she died only thirty-one.

2010
 
"Phillis Wheatley" is an acrostic poem. She is the beginning of African-American literature.  What I really enjoy about her story is how her bright intelligence put to lie the idea that black people were inherently inferior, convincing the father of our country that someday we all would truly be equal.
 
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Saturday, August 28, 2010

A polysyllogism about writing

THE WRITING SORITES

Faulkner reads Shakespeare, including Macbeth with its speech “Life is a tale told by an idiot, full of sound and fury, signifying nothing.”

Faulkner writes his many books, including The Sound and the Fury.

Marquez and Rushdie read Faulkner.

Marquez and Rushdie are influenced by Faulkner.

Marquez and Rushdie write like Faulkner, including respectively the books One Hundred Years of Solitude and Midnight’s Children.

I read Marquez and Rushdie, staying up past midnight.

I am influenced by Marquez and Rushdie.

I am influenced by Faulkner.

I write like Marquez and Rushdie, spending much time in solitude.

I write like Faulkner, with much sound and fury.

I signify nothing.

I am an idiot.
2009
 
This is a humorous poem poking fun at me.
 
("Sorites Paradox"


First published Fri Jan 17, 1997; substantive revision Mon Aug 15, 2005

The sorites paradox is the name given to a class of paradoxical arguments, also known as little-by-little arguments, which arise as a result of the indeterminacy surrounding limits of application of the predicates involved. For example, the concept of a heap appears to lack sharp boundaries and, as a consequence of the subsequent indeterminacy surrounding the extension of the predicate ‘is a heap’, no one grain of wheat can be identified as making the difference between being a heap and not being a heap. Given then that one grain of wheat does not make a heap, it would seem to follow that two do not, thus three do not, and so on. In the end it would appear that no amount of wheat can make a heap. We are faced with paradox since from apparently true premises by seemingly uncontroversial reasoning we arrive at an apparently false conclusion.


This phenomenon at the heart of the paradox is now recognised as the phenomenon of vagueness (see the entry on vagueness). Once identified, vagueness can be seen to be a feature of syntactic categories other than predicates, nonetheless one speaks primarily of the vagueness of predicates. Names, adjectives, adverbs and so on are only susceptible to paradoxical sorites reasoning in a derivative sense.


Sorites arguments of the paradoxical form are to be distinguished from multi-premise syllogisms (polysyllogisms) which are sometimes also referred to as sorites arguments. Whilst both polysyllogisms and sorites paradoxes are chain-arguments, the former need not be paradoxical in nature and the latter need not be syllogistic in form. --Stanford Encyclopedia of Philosophy: http://plato.stanford.edu/entries/sorites-paradox/)


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Friday, August 27, 2010

Buck must find two missing college students Ch. 4



ENCOMIENDA

Chapter 4



The next morning before I left for Everglades City, I wrote a note to Ruben. “There’s a letter to one of the missing boys from his father. See what you can find out about the father: socioeconomic status, political views, lifestyle dangers, etc. Let’s make sure that some of Venezuela’s politics hasn’t spilled over onto us. Caridad can fill you in on some of the details. File is in its folder: Concepción – missing person.”

I drove leisurely across the Trail. I drove slowly, not only because the two-lane blacktop undulates and has potholes but also because I wanted to put my mind into the two college boys’ minds. They were on Christmas break, free to do what they wanted, going to Tampa to see a couple good-looking girls from school. I imagined Nano driving and Paulie talking about this and that: maybe the college football team’s national championship prospects, maybe professors they liked or didn’t like, maybe how many bases they could get to with the girls, maybe about what it was like back home in their respective countries – the upheavals in Venezuela, the prosperity of a freer Mexico – maybe how different or alike Miami was to their home countries. For me, driving is conducive to thinking.

However, I was stopped before long by a lone figure on the highway: a girl hitchhiking. I have a policy of not picking up hitchhikers, but I had been cruising along thinking about what had happened to a couple missing offspring and here on the road was somebody’s offspring. I didn’t know if she was missing, but she was doing a very dangerous thing.

As I passed her, I could see that she was very young, maybe another college student or younger. She was thin and dressed for the road as if she’d had some experience on it. She wore walking boots, loose blue jeans, an orange sweatshirt, sunglasses and a floppy floral-print hat to keep the sun off. She had a backpack bulging with unknown items. She was holding a cardboard sign that read “Ft. Myers.”

I don’t pick up hitchhikers for several reasons. First, they often smell from being unwashed and on the road for days; driving is not pleasant while the nose is being assaulted by distracting, acrid odors. Second, if the hiker is high on some substance, then one has to sit with an altered consciousness in the passenger seat; depending on the substance swallowed or inhaled, the hiker could erupt into frantic discourse or sink into drooling fantasy. Neither state makes for pleasant conversation. Third, hitchhikers can be moochers, begging not only for rides but also for food, drink, smokes and money. Most importantly, the hiker could be as predatory as any driver. He or she could be participating in a scam or operating as a ruse for a holdup. Drivers have to be very cautious.

But my conscience made me stop; I didn’t want to leave a young woman in jeopardy by the side of the road. I pulled over and in my rearview mirror watched her run toward my Z3, her backpack swaying from side to side. Before she reached me, I opened my door and stepped out and held my hand up for her to stop.

She stopped and stared at me. I’m not a small man. I waved her forward and she stepped in front of me. My actions alerted her that I wasn’t an ordinary driver.

She said, “Are you a cop?”

I said, “I’m willing to give you a ride, but first I want to make sure you’re decent.”

She smiled and said nothing.

She didn’t smell bad. She had bathed recently and her clothes were fresh. She wasn’t wearing perfume, but she smelled newly scrubbed with soap. She’d passed the first test.

I said, “Take off your glasses, so I can see your eyes.”

Her eyes were light brown with clear white pupils and irises of normal diameter, neither the dilated black holes of amphetamines nor the pinhead dots of opiates. She said, “Well?”

I said, “All right, I’m going your way. Do you have any weapons on you?”

She wriggled out of the nylon backpack and swung it down. She ripped the Velcro-secured top open and said, “Just this claw hammer . . .” The hammer was a beauty; red wooden handle and black steel head. She pulled her hat off and pulled out a long pearl-tipped, silver hatpin from the band. “and this hatpin . . .” She stuck the hatpin back into the band and patted her right pocket with her right hand. “and a pocketknife in my pocket.”

“Let me see the knife.”

She took it out and opened it. It was also pretty: an ivory handle engraved with an eagle inlaid with turquoise and obsidian and coral and armed with a three-inch steel blade with one keen edge, perfectly legal. She said, “It’s my dad’s.”

“Ok, put it back. I guess you’re good to go. Stuff your backpack behind the seat. My trunk is full.”

When she had pulled off the hat, her long, shiny black hair had tumbled down and draped around her back and shoulders. She picked up the pack, resealed the top and put it and her hat behind the seats. Then she slid in and I got in after her.

As I put the car in gear and rolled onto the blacktop, she said, “Are you going all the way to Fort Myers?”

“Maybe. I’m not sure.”

“Why aren’t you sure? Don’t you know where you’re going?”

“No, I don’t.”

“Why don’t you know?”

I looked at her. She was looking right into my eyes. I concluded that this young person was traveling purposefully, not necessarily fleeing. I said, “I tell you what. First, answer some questions for me. And when I’m finished, you can ask me anything you want.”

“Ok.”

“How old are you?”

“Fifteen.”

“Shouldn’t you be in school?”

“School is pretty boring.”

“Do you live in Fort Myers?”

“My mother lives in Fort Myers.”

“So, you’re going to visit your mother?”

“Sort of.”

“Does your father live in Miami?”

“Yes.”

“Your parents are divorced?”

“Yes.”

“You live with your father?”

“Sometimes.”

“Who has custody?”

“Mom.”

“So, you live in Fort Myers.”

“Officially.”

“Doesn’t your mother have something to say about that.”

“She has custody, but not control.”

“Who has control?”

“Me.” She smiled.

“Why are you on the road?”

“To go from one place to the other.”

“Ok, smarty pants, I mean why didn’t you take a plane or a bus?”

“I prefer making my own way and saving the ticket fare. Instead of the airlines having the sixty-nine dollars, I have it.”

“Do your parents know you’ve left?’

“Dad will figure it out tonight. And Mom will know it when I get there.”

“So, you do this often?”

“Often enough.”

“Don’t your parents worry?”

“Sure. But they’ve gotten used to it.”

“You should call your Dad to let him know you’ve left.”

“Why?”

“It’s called being considerate.”

She glared at me a minute and said, “All right.” She pulled a cell phone out of her left front pocket, opened it and punched on the set number. I could hear a phone ringing faintly.

Speaking into the phone, she said, “Hi, Dad, I’m heading back to Mom’s.”

. . . .

“No, I’m hitching.”

. . . .

“No, I’ve already got a ride.”

. . . .

“With some guy.”

She handed me the phone. “He wants to talk to you.”

I pulled onto the shoulder of the road and stopped and took the phone. “Hello”

A male voice said, “This is Iris’s father Bill Dabney. Who are you?”

“My name is Buck Jaspers. I’m a private detective heading toward Naples on a case. I saw your daughter thumbing rides and was concerned for her. I thought she’d be safer with me than someone else.”

“Can I have your driver’s license number?”

“No, I don’t give out that information to people I don’t know. But if you want to check on my validity, call Lieutenant Horatio Jenks with Metro Homicide. He’ll vouch for me.”

“Will you take her all the way to Fort Myers? I’ll pay the extra mileage.”

“Don’t worry about that. This case may take me that far anyway.”

“She’s not a bad kid, just very headstrong.”

“I’ve learned that already.”

“Well, let me talk to her.”

I passed the phone back to Iris.

She said, “Dad, I’ll be fine. Goodbye.”

I said, “Now, call your mother.”

“She won’t be worrying. She doesn’t even know I’m coming.”

“Then promise me you’ll call her when we stop for lunch.”

“Ok, I promise. Geez, if I’d known I was getting into a car with another parent, I’d have waited for another ride.”

I laughed.

She said, “Are you really a private dick?”

“We like to be called private investigator.”

“What kind of case are you working on?”

“Missing persons.”

“Who’s missing?”

“I’d rather not say.”

“Maybe I’ve seen ‘em. Did they go down the Trail?”

“Yes.”

“What kind of car were they driving?”

“A Toyota Samurai.”

“Those are cute. But I’ve never gotten a ride in one. Been in plenty of trucks and vans and lots of cars.”

“Ever had any bad experiences?”

“Of course. There’s lots of goofy people out here.”

“What was your bad experience?”

“Been more than one. Once I got picked up by a guy that was really drunk. I didn’t realize how drunk until I was in and he was driving. He kept weaving and drifting. Here and there. Over the yellow line. Onto the shoulder. I’d have to yell and grab the wheel and get us back on line. Finally, he passed out altogether, so I stopped the car, shoved him into the passenger seat and drove us all the way to Miami. He never woke up. When I was close to Dad’s area, I pulled over, turned the car off and left him sleeping on the shoulder on the turnpike. I figured a trooper would wake him sooner or later.

“A lot of guys ask for sex, but I never let ‘em have any. A guy tried to rape me last year. I stuck him with the hatpin and told him I’d injected him with poison. We were almost to Naples, so he drove straight to the hospital and went into the emergency room. He was yelling and screaming that I had tried to kill him. ‘This bitch is a witch!’ I got my stuff and ran. I suppose he was pretty angry when he found out he just had a pinprick.”

I laughed. I said, “Iris in control.”

“Right.”

“You seem pretty bright. Too bad you don’t like school.”

“I like learning. I keep up. In fact, I’ve got my books in my backpack. That’s why it’s so stuffed.”

“How do you know what the assignments are?”

“I call the teachers and they send me text messages.” She pulled out her cell phone and tapped a few keypads. “See.” She held the cell phone in front of my face so I could see the screen. On the screen were the words “Read Chapter 10, ‘A Rebirth of Learning.’ Answer the questions at the end of the chapter.”

I said, “Did you read it?”

“Did. It’s about the Renaissance.”

“World history class?”

“Right.”

“Did you do the questions?”

“Did.” She tapped more keys and showed me the screen again. It read “Read ‘Julius Caesar’; write an essay discussing the virtues of a republic versus a dictatorship.”

“Does that refer to the play by Shakespeare?”

“Does.”

“Did you write the essay?”

“Did. I’ll type it up when I get home.”

“Sounds like advanced placement classes.”

“Are.”

“So, you’re a little genius?”

“Words like ‘genius’ are useless. I’m just me. What about you? You seem pretty smart for a private d . . . investigator.”

“I have a college degree and I enjoy reading history.”

“What made you become a detective? Were you a policeman first?”

“It’s one thing I’m pretty good at. I was an MP in the military and while I was going to college, I worked as a security guard. My major is history; my minor is criminology.”

END of Chapter 4
 
Iris is patterned after my younger sister when she was a teenager.  She wasn't really wild; she just wasn't sure who was in charge of her, so felt free to roam.
 
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Tuesday, August 24, 2010

Cuba's poet and freedom fighter

Jose Marti


Simple Verse of José Martí



I’m a sincere man
From where the palm grows,1
And before I die I want
To scatter my verses from my soul.

1 Cuba


My verse is from a clear green
And from a bright red.
My verse is a wounded stag
That seeks shelter in the woods.


I have seen the injured eagle
Fly to the serene blue
And kill in its lair
The poisonous viper.


I come from all places
And to all places I go.
I am art inside the arts;
And in the woods, the woods.


The leopard has a pelt
In the dry, dun forest.
I have more than the leopard,
For I have a good friend.


I grow a white rose
In June as in January
For the true friend
Who gives me his honest hand.


And for the cruel who tear out
The heart that gives me life,
I don’t grow stinging nettles;
I grow a white rose.


I want when I die --
No homeland, but no master --2
To have in my tomb a sprig
Of flowers and a flag.

2 Expatriate of Cuba, but free from Spain’s tyranny.


Don’t put me in the dark
To die like a traitor.
I am good, and as good,
I will die facing the sun.


Sometimes when I’m happy
Like a simple schoolboy,
I think of the yellow canary
That has such black eyes.3

3 Symbolic reference to Spain (yellow) and the evil (black) that it has caused.


With the earth’s poor,
My die is cast.
The mountain stream
Pleases more than the sea.


I trembled once at the fence
At the vineyard’s entrance
When the foreign queen-brute
Bit my daughter’s brow.


If you see a mountain of spray,
It’s my verse you see;
My verse is a mountain,
And an open fan of feathers.


These verses are my translation, although I have to credit Federico Rodriguez who stimulated me to do the translations and gave me suggestions on tone and diction.  They have not been published before now.  Jose Marti for Cubans is like Thomas Paine or Thomas Jefferson or Patrick Henry or all three combined for Americans because Marti articulated the hopes and desires of the Cubans.  Marti is a hero to both expatriates in Miami and ironically to Fidelistas, although I doubt Marti would think highly of a totalitarian state, nor would he be tolerated there.  If Jose Marti were alive today, he would probably be imprisoned in Cuba for speaking and writing against the oppressive state.
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Friday, August 20, 2010

Buck must find two missing college students Ch. 3


Depictions of the encomienda system in the new world:
Clockwise: (1) Natives working for a conquistador; (2)
A Catholic priest giving Christianity to the natives. (3)
Cruelty by a conquistador to his native worker.

ENCOMIENDA


Chapter 3




After lunch I returned to the office and found a reply from janicep waiting in my inbox. It read, “Mr. Jaspers, I’m sorry to hear about the boys. The girls were hoping they’d make it up here. I’m Rhonda Jaro’s mother. She used my email while she and Melissa were here. I’ll call them tonight and let them know what happened. How do I know you’re legit? Can you fax me some ID at the following number?”

Rhonda had a cautious mother. That was a good thing. I copied my P.I. license on some letterhead paper and faxed it to the number she gave.

Then I gave Caridad Paulie’s letter. “I think this is from his father. Would you write a very tactful letter to let him know that his son is missing and that we’re trying to find him. In Spanish.”

About a half an hour later the office phone rang. Caridad buzzed me. “Buck, a Mrs. Jaro on the line for you.”

“Good. Thanks, Caridad.” I picked up the receiver, “Buck Jaspers speaking.”

“Ok, I guess you’re legit.” Her voice was raspy as if she was or had been a long-time cigarette smoker. “I’m very careful when it comes to my baby girl.”

“Is she your only child?”

“No, I’ve also got three hulking boys – or men, I should say – but she’s the baby.”

“Why’d you send her to school in Miami?”

“That was her idea. Her father died a few years ago and left us a house free and clear and a couple surprise insurance policies. So, I told her she was going to college anywhere she liked. She liked Miami.”

“Is she a good student?”

“Well, she’s smart enough, but I’m not sure how focused she is on her classes. She got all Bs last semester. I hear Miami’s a pretty crazy place.”

“Its reputation far exceeds the reality. The media make it seem a lot crazier than it is.” It was a bit of a lie, but I knew her mind needed easing. “Anyway, who is Melissa, a classmate?”

“Right. Melissa’s from Bradenton, so the two hit it off ‘cause they had the hometown in common.”

“Mrs. Jaro, I really appreciate your calling me. I would like to talk to the girls. Is that possible?”

“I guess so. Let me give you Rhonda’s number. You call her and she can decide whether to talk to you or not. Give me a half hour to talk to her first.”

I drank some water, got a road atlas off my shelf. On a tabloid-size sheet of paper, I photocopied the page with the map of South Florida from Tampa to Miami. With a light blue highlighter, I traced the route that we knew so far. South Bay Apartments to the Palmetto Expressway to Calle Ocho to the Tamiami Trail. At the juncture of the Trail, I wrote with a blue pen early morning, buys gas. Then I highlighted the Trail all the way to the turnoff on Highway 29 to Everglades City. Below Everglades City, I wrote stops for lunch at the Everglades Inn. Such visual devices are important to me; they help me focus.

Then I told Caridad to cut a check for Vlad for one day’s work. I know it was only half a day, but that’s because the students’ computers were easier to get into than we had expected. The process could’ve taken much longer, and what if he’d gotten a call for other work while he was doing my bidding? Besides, if I pay him fully, he’ll come the next time I call: free-market reciprocity. Ben would’ve approved.

I looked up encomienda in Webster’s dictionary. It wasn’t there. I looked it up in a Spanish dictionary. The definition wasn’t very helpful: "In colonial America, a commission from the King to a conquistador." I went on the Internet to Bartleby.com. An explanation from the Columbia Encyclopedia read:

A system of tributory labor established in Spanish America. Developed as a means of securing an adequate and cheap labor supply, the encomienda was first used over the conquered Moors of Spain. Transplanted to the New World, it gave the conquistador control over the native populations by requiring them to pay tribute from their lands, which were “granted” to deserving subjects of the Spanish crown. The natives often rendered personal services as well. In return the grantee was theoretically obligated to protect his wards, to instruct them in the Christian faith, and to defend their right to use the land for their own subsistence. When first applied in the West Indies, this labor system wrought such hardship that the population was soon decimated. This resulted in efforts by the Spanish king and the Dominican order to suppress encomiendas, but the need of the conquerors to reward their supporters led to de facto recognition of the practice. The crown prevented the encomienda from becoming hereditary, and with the New Laws (1542) promulgated by Las Casas, the system gradually died out, to be replaced by the repartimiento and finally debt peonage. Similar systems of land and labor apportionment were adopted by other colonial powers, notably the Portuguese, the Dutch, and the French.


I printed the explanation, made a copy and added it to the file. I left the other copy on my desk.

Then I dialed Rhonda Jaro’s number. A young female voice answered. “Hello.”

“Rhonda Jaro?”

“Yes. Who’s this?”

“My name is Buck Jaspers. I’m a private investigator.”

“Yes, Mama said you’d call.”

“If it’s possible, I’d like to talk to you and your friend Melissa together.”

“We’re not allowed to have male guests in the dorm.”

At that point I remembered what college was like for most students – bland cafeteria food, no private transportation. “I tell you what, I’ll buy you and Melissa dinner tonight. We can talk then. What do you say?”

“Well, where would you take us?” She was probably thinking fast food.

“It’d have to be someplace quiet, so we could talk. Do you like Italian food?”

“Sure.”

“Ok. How ‘bout the Flamingo on Biscayne?”

“Sounds good.”

“Six o’clock?”

“Ok.”

“Is your dorm close to the Metrorail station?”

“Not too far.”

“Ok, I’ll pick you up there.”

“Wait. How will we know you?”

“I’ll be driving a blue BMW Z3 convertible.”

“Awesome.”


* * * *


They both squeezed into the passenger seat and got the seat belt around. They were smiling and laughing. Rhonda was a short, thin blonde with a round, happy face. Melissa was just as thin but six inches taller and a brunette. They were full of youthful energy; this night was just another adventure. They wore hip-hugging jeans and cotton pullovers.

And on the way to the restaurant, the damnedest thing happened. I’ve known people in this town that I haven’t seen for years even though we are no more than miles away from each other most of the time. But whom did we run into on the way down Dixie Highway: my partner Ruben, his wife Luli and their kids. I was cruising along with those two fresh-faced beauties, their hair whipping behind them, when I heard, “Bu-u-ck! Bu-u-ck!” Children’s voices screaming my name. I looked over and Ruben’s Buick had pulled up next to us. He and Luli grinned and waved and he gave me the thumb-up sign. His kids waved and yelled and pressed ketchup embossed kisses against the Plexiglas of their window. I knew I’d have to call him to explain; otherwise, he’d think I was robbing cradles for dates. I waved back and smiled.

The food at the Flamingo was just what the girls were hoping for, and they were primed to talk. Melissa had meatballs; Rhonda had chicken Parmesan; I had a pasta salad. They wanted to order wine, but I wouldn’t let them. They settled for iced tea.

Nevertheless, their stories about Nano and Paulie were more confirming than revealing. Rhonda had met Paulie at a party and he asked her out. Through him, she met Nano. She decided she liked Nano better than Paulie; Nano seemed more serious and dedicated. She introduced Melissa to them, hoping Paulie would like her. He did and she liked him. That led to the Christmas invitation. They were both surprised when the guys didn’t show. Their narrative confirmed that Nano was intelligent, highly focused; Paulie, fun-loving, adventurous.

I asked them if they had dated anyone else.

Rhonda said, “Of course. I for one am not looking to be chained down before I get a Bachelor’s degree.”

Melissa said, “Me neither.”

“Were any of the other guys serious?”

Melissa said, “You mean like jealous or obsessive?”

“Yeah, like that.”

“I hope not. Because we weren’t.”

Then Rhonda’s tone changed, revealing that maybe for Nano she had held higher hopes despite the declarations of independence. “Mr. Jaspers, what do you think happened to them? Do you think they’re alive?”

“I don’t know, but I’m going to find out.”

For two skinny women, they put away a lot of food, including a dessert of ice cream and cake. I dropped them off at their dorm afterward and they said they’d be willing to do it again. I told them they were sweet and drove away.

As soon as I got inside my apartment, I called Ruben. “Ruben, it’s not what you think.”

END of Chapter 3
 
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Thursday, August 19, 2010

The meek shall inherit



ROYAL PALMS



Three storms in a month
And still you stand
Erect shafts against the glowing
Sky. So I bow
To you. During the storms
I saw how your tensile strength
Bent flexibly against
The winds that pushed
Down larger, stiffer trees and
Broke their limbs. You gave up
Fronds and seeds whipped
From your tractability,
But that is all. I imagine that
This is how the meek
Shall inherit, their bending and
Giving before the blows break them –
And their bounding back. The earth
Is yours, O, resilient palm,
Prescient of the supple
Saviors of the earth!

2006

"Royal Palms" was published first in the Ann Arbor Review, 2007;  it was included in the unpublished An Operose Hierodule of the Muse, 2008.
 
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Wednesday, August 18, 2010

another story from the Apochrypha retold

Two oil paintings of Susanah



(APOCRYPHAL) SUSANAH



Daniel knew how to make
The evildoers pay,
Knew how to shake
The truth from what they say.


Susanah young and sweet
Like many a temptress
Walks on innocent feet
Into an evil fortress.


The two old satyrs
Have her in their reach
But their grasp splatters
Against her honest breach


Of what she did not know.
Repulsed, reviled, they vow
She free shall not go.
They conspire only now


They’ll go to council high,
Accuse of what they could not have
Say the flash of thigh
Drew their attention to a knave


With whom she lay
And saw her open to the beast
And let him have his way
To taste her carnal feast.


So the council drew her nigh
Laid the charges at her feet.
Aghast, she could just deny,
Say she was yet discreet.


The judges to their peers assent:
The accusers, respected men,
Not known to lie with sin;
The girl, voluptuous, then


To the eye if naught more
Could easily, they thought
Have tempted any poor
Youth who might have caught


Himself within her net
Of shapely nubile flesh
And her eyes and lips wet
With lust and all so fresh.


Then Daniel stepped forth,
Said he could solve the mess.
Take the accusers henceforth
To separate rooms to confess


How thus all came to be.
He groped for details not
Yet conspired. Let them see
A different scene hot


Beneath a tree. What’s this?
One says fruit; one says fir.
Let us these charges dismiss:
The old goats are one liar


Inside two cloaks. Here stands
An innocent blessed of the Lord.
The men were the evil hands
Caught by their own word.


[Not so fast. I think more
May appear if we look.
The girl was no whore
We can write in the book,



But even at her tender age
She had wiles enough
To know that in a stage
She could play a rough




And tumble kind of girl
To draw old men there
And make them a world
Un-thought of where




They trod so many years.
Maybe she wanted a small
Thing or money or appear
To be their desire’s thrall.




No matter. She played,
They hungered and grasped,
She drew back and prayed,
They angered and lashed.]

2006
 
"(Apochryphal) Susanah" was included in the unpublished An Operose Hierodule of the Muse, 2008.  This topic of the young girl seduced (or is it the old men seduced?) is controversial.  Lolita by Vladimir Nabokov most famously studies this theme, and he does it in such a way, so the reader is unsure of who is in charge, the older man or the girl. The recent movie An Education also delves into this theme.  Flash!  Just this morning I was listening to Miami's classical music station as I wrote, right after 6 a.m.Garrison Keillor comes on with a few moments of poetry and discusses events in literature that happened on this date.  It turns out that Lolita was published on this date in 1955; Graham Greene, the British writer, gave it a good review, but others condemned it as pornography.   In light of new research indicating that American girls are reaching puberty at an earlier age, this theme may be revisited. NOTE: I generally have a cup of coffee (it is in my hand now) with breakfast before I write. Keillor also told that Honoré de Blazac, the 19th century French fiction writer, died on this date; reportedly, Balzac drank 40-50 cups of black coffee every day.  His heart gave out at 51. Below are items related to this blog.















Tuesday, August 17, 2010

Cesar Vallejo

Cesar Vallejo



THE BLACK HERALDS


By Cesar Vallejo


There are blows in life so hard . . . I don’t know!
Blows like the fury of God; as if before them
The undercurrent of all we suffer
Is soaked into our souls . . . I don’t know!


They are small; but they are . . . they open dark crevices
In the bravest of faces and in the strongest of backs,
They are perhaps the ponies of Attila’s hordes;
Or the black heralds sent for us by Death.


They are the precipitous falls of the Christs of the soul,
Of some loved one that Fate blasphemes,
These bloody blows are the crackling of any bread
That burns us in the door of the oven.


And man . . . pitiful . . . pitiful!
Turns his eyes, as if someone had tapped him on the shoulder;
Turns his manic eyes, and all reality pools
Like a puddle of guilt, in the stare.
There are blows in life, so hard . . . I don’t know!

I translated "The Black Heralds" first in the early 1990s with a professor from Crown Business Institute.  I looked through my paper files in 2007 but could not find that translation, so I translated it again by myself.  Below are items related to this blog.

Monday, August 16, 2010

He was a good guy, but he'd do anything to succeed.


LOCAL BOY MAKES EVIL


Olivia transformed Bert from the callow innocent he had been. As soon as he met her, I could see him melting and re-forming like a re-cast bronze image in a metalworker's forge. Unaware, he was shaped by her touch, her glance, her moods, her tastes. And I watched it happen – helpless as any father watching his son changing for better or worse.

When Humberto Alvarez had applied for a teaching position at our school, I hired him despite the realization that teaching was not his main focus: He was a struggling thespian, a recent graduate of the Miami University theater department. Right away I felt he would be responsible, conscientious, and honest even though he seemed a trifle dismayed at the raw bone life had thrown him so far. His personal characteristics were strong recommendations, but he was also articulate, intelligent, and linguistically astute; so I knew he would be a good, if not great, English teacher. Oh, but he was so-o-o innocent! I took a fatherly interest in him; I wanted to see him do well, and I was willing to give him a chance. Besides, in a private school, certified teachers are difficult to come by since they can command higher pay elsewhere.

I had no idea whether he was a good actor, but he was certainly dedicated. Several times in the first two years, he missed classes to audition or go for cattle calls. I covered his classes for him. He landed a few television commercials which supplemented his income. In one he played a family man purchasing a home, but I thought he looked too young to be the father of two children. He did voice-overs for radio commercials. He performed bit parts in local live theater. His greatest failure was being overlooked by Miami Vice. He was too clean-cut, too innocent for that festival of sleaze and glitter. The casting director preached that to him.

My heart bled for him as he struggled with his desire to act. How could he make himself over to be hard enough? How could his buttery complexion and outlook take on the grim burnish of cold steel? Only suffering and the “slings and arrows of outrageous fortune” could do that. I knew it, but I held my peace, congratulated him when he landed a part, smiled a benediction when he did well.

He had another dilemma as an actor: Although he was Hispanic, he didn’t have the classic dark, matinee-idol Don Juan looks. His innocent gray eyes and blond hair and pale, smooth skin did not prepare anyone for Humberto Alvarez. At the school, we called him Bert. One day he presented me with his business card, “Bertoli Ecco, Actor” with the masks of tragedy and comedy underneath. “What do you think?” he asked. “Maybe I’ll have better luck as an Italian.”

Spanish wasn’t his first language. He grew up in Miami and spoke English like an American. He understood Spanish, but he was a little hesitant when he spoke it, searching for words and phrases and inflections. His students couldn’t believe he was Cuban and called him EL Gringo Maestro del Ingles.

He told me in his sweet, puerile voice, “I go for an audition and they talk by me. ’Hey, we asked for Alvarez,’ they say. ‘I’m Alvarez,’ I say and they say, ‘Naw, we were expecting someone more Hispanic.’ Can you believe that? Then I go for a cattle call. The casting director calls me over because I look the part. I do the scene. She says ‘Maybe.’ Later I get a call from the secretary. ‘Sorry, Mr. Alvarez, this part doesn’t call for a Hispanic.’ Damned if I am, damned if I’m not!”

I smiled, shook my head. What could I have said?

Many of the women at the school could have been his for the asking, but he was fastidious and held the moral high ground. Some women didn’t care and rushed him with flirtations, propositions or innuendos; those who got out of hand I had to speak to in my office to calm their driven hearts. The more experienced ones said, “Bah, who wants a boy like that!” One particularly uninhibited lady – if I may use the genteel term with such a brazen action – hovered until one day he bent over to retrieve a dropped pencil; whereupon she grabbed his genitals. In my office before I expelled her, she claimed she just wanted to see if he “tiene cojones.” How his face had blazed with consternation! God had to love him.

That thought – that God loved him – seemed ironic to me since his chosen profession was not celebrated for its angelic life-style; in fact, just the opposite. American drama had had little to brag about before the twentieth century. Thespians had been closer to snake-oil hawkers, conjurors, flimflam artists and rainmakers. Players often acted before drunken audiences and were as likely to ride out of town on a rail or sneak away in the bewitching hours as they were to leave on the morning coach. The Puritans had banned the theater altogether as the work of the devil, that trickster, as a form of deception and illusion. Satan was the consummate player, appearing in whichever guise could tempt a person to give up his soul for damnation. To be an actor back then was to be Lucifer’s playmate.

I couldn’t see that things had changed all that much except that a clever actor could make a lot more money and live a devilish life at a more luxurious level. However, if that life was what my surrogate son wanted, then I wished it for him.

For Bert, the crossroads came when he met Olivia, a recent refugee from Cuban television. She was strikingly attractive in the classic Latin style: cascading dark hair, full sensuous lips, large brimstone brown eyes – all highlighted by makeup. He met her at a cast party and was immediately taken with her. They talked, touched, bonded. A few weeks later, they were living together. She was twelve years his senior, and although he didn’t know it, she was exactly what he needed. He was enchanted.

Bert introduced Olivia to me at a graduation ceremony. She was a charmer, smooth as a masseur’s oiled hands. She kissed me as naturally as taking breath. I liked her immediately, but the contrast in their ages made me wince even though I’m not a judgmental person and know the human possibilities for mating are multiple and complex. Maybe I was a little jealous because she was closer to my age than his. Not only did she have him by a dozen years, but by eons of experience. Enthralled, Bert said to me, “You know, it’s like she fell from heaven.” My heart ached for him; I suspected what he was in for because I’d been a similar love-slave in my youth. The single females – graduates and staff – who had wanted, but not caught, him, quipped, “Who’s that? His mother? His older sister?” But they knew that for them his heart was lost forever.

Olivia leaned back in her chair behind the banquet table; she knew she had the prize. She and Bert danced a fiery dance as if they were hoofed instead of shod. He was chained to her side. Her eyes caught how others looked at them, at him, at her. She saw every nuance because she had the experience; he saw nothing except Olivia. She was in her favorite role: puppeteer, prompter, console mistress.

Yes, she was an actress, too, and a good one. She had already grappled television roles which brightened her local fame, especially within the Hispanic community. The camera liked her. The spotlight loved her. Strangers wrote her letters. She was seductive even through microwaves. Men thought she was the scratch for their itches; they sent her proposals and propositions.

However, the man she wanted was already in her bed where he rode her like a gambling sinner rides the devil’s luck. He gave her himself body and soul. Early in their relationship, he often dragged in red-eyed, but with a Sybarite’s grin, late to school. He was in a crucible – melting and re-forming, mutating before us through the heat of Olivia.

She drove him to perform and used her burgeoning influence to get him parts in live theater, experimental theater. I went to one play, but Bert’s role was clearly beyond his powers. Olivia was marvelous in hers, and the audience was enraptured by her performance like moths before a flame; she was an enchantress on stage, too. Next to her, Bert seemed a carved marionette, his emotions strained and artificial. I kissed Olivia afterward, but mine was only one kiss among many from her idolaters in whose warm adoration she basked. Bert held back, but I grabbed his hand and pumped it. “Good show,” I said, smiling hard, but I suppose I wasn’t any better at acting than he had been that night. “Thanks,” he said, but he wasn’t convinced.

Nevertheless, his passion carried him along. Olivia compelled him to perfect his Spanish, so he worked diligently with her as his linguistics coach. He toted around a mini-recorder with earphones and carried on a dialog with it. Occasionally, I’d catch him in his classroom during a break. There he would be declaiming page after page of Spanish script. The practice worked because he eventually picked up more jobs doing Spanish voiceovers.

As their relationship passed from months into the second year, Bert began to be a little desperate. He had gone to school with Arty Munoz and Mickey Rovira, so as their stars began to rise in Hollywood, Bert began to feel left out as if time were leapfrogging over him. A grim determination seized him and began to age him bit by bit. I worried about him, but what could I say? Es la vida. He was still so young.

One day Bert almost apologetically invited me to lunch. Of course, I was glad to go, but he seemed edgy, precipitous. He took me to one of his favorite Cuban restaurants EL Gallego on Calle Ocho, and after we’d ordered, he shoveled a slim manuscript toward me. “I’ve been working on a film script. Would you mind looking it over and telling me what you think? I respect your opinion.”

“Of course.” I took it and began reading page by page, but soon the pescados fritos con arroz y plantanos was set before us and I put the manuscript aside to eat. We chatted.

“How’s Olivia these days?”

“Fine,” he said, but a disturbed, corrupted cinder had flashed to the corner of his iris before he extinguished it with a forkful of plantain and continued. “The script is based on my family’s experiences in Cuba and here.”

“I thought it might be.”

“I’m sending it to some people I know in L.A. I told them about it over the phone, and they were interested.”

“Great. Can I take it home and read it carefully?”

Cierto,” he replied and smiled. “You don’t mind, do you?”

Cierto no,” I answered.

Actually, the script was pretty good. I read it several times over the weekend and liked it. The plot was inflammatory and the beginning was a grabber. The characters were believable. I thought, He’s got something fine here. Shows growth. It’s got rough edges here and there, but those can be ironed out. On Monday at the start of the school day, I was happy to be able to tell him the truth and wish him luck as I handed the script back. He gleamed at my reaction. However, something else was sitting on his shoulders, and I guessed what it was. (Remember, I’d been through it.) Something was happening in his relationship with Olivia – I didn’t know what – but when he surfaced alone at the next graduation, I knew that whatever it was, was serious. I asked about Olivia as usual.

“Oh, she had to work tonight,” he said.

“Oh, a play?”

“No, television.”

I was chagrined to hear his first lie. She never worked “the tube” on weekend nights, but I let it drop. If the circumstances were too prickly to talk about, I didn’t want to push the subject.

During the next few weeks, surveillance reports poured in through the office grapevine. “I saw Olivia with someone else at Regina’s. What in hell’s going on?” said one secretary. “I was going by their apartment, and Olivia came out all dressed up, but she got in her car and drove off alone,” reported a filing clerk. “Bert was at the Cameo with some young dumb thing!” blurted an admissions officer. “I asked him where Olivia was, and he gave me a toxic look, you know what I mean?”

Then the hard thing happened. He moved out from Olivia’s apartment and threw himself on a hot, young student – the only time he had crossed that invisible professional boundary between student and teacher. I knew he was blanketing his pain with the arms of another, clutching at an emotional fire extinguisher – a backfire to fight the blaze that had consumed him for two years.

I felt his pain, suffered with him, but there were complications. The hot, young student was married to an older man who worshipped her and gave her whatever material things she wanted. Bert and this new flame burned brightly for two weeks while I waited for the fire to subside, hoping it would do so before it caused an explosion. I would have had a fatherly talk with Bert except no one had complained and I didn’t want to butt in when I was sure the flare-up of passion was temporary. Maybe I felt a trifle guilty.

The very next Monday, the paramour’s cuckolded, doleful-eyed husband came to my office. I smiled my best administrative smile and said, “Be seated. Me gusta a conocerle.” We shook hands. His English was as good as my Spanish, so we made ourselves understood. The gist of the conversation was that he had heard I was a poet. Yes. He wrote poems, too. Yes. He presented me with a poem. I said thank you. Then I realized that he knew he was cuckolded, but he didn’t know by whom. Maybe he thought I was the guy, and maybe the guilt I had for other reasons showed on my bureaucratic face despite my efforts to present an unexplored moon in the outer rim of the solar system. Lamely, I commented that his wife was a good student. He smiled sadly. I felt guiltier. Then he left, dragging behind him his pride. I took a deep breath and sighed. Then I read the poem; it was about love and suffering.

My poor translation follows:

     “I loved too much
     One who did not love me.
     How can such
     A thing make her free?
     By my hand I go
     Break the chain that held her so.”

The next day, his disloyal wife found him hanging by a nylon rope from the light fixture in the ceiling of their bedroom; his distended bare feet dangled over the bed. She was absent from school a long time after that. The affair with Bert was blown out as if by a sudden icy wind.

A few weeks afterward, Bert, looking at least five years older, but with a subdued glimmer lighting his features, came by my office to hand in his resignation.

“What’s this?” I asked.

His eyes were tiny torches of volcanic glitter. “I got a break. I auditioned for a Spanish soap and I got the part – a major character.”

“Congratulations!” I said with earnest enthusiasm. “What’s the part?”

“A filthy-rich, power-hungry, lecherous, manipulative, vengeful, murderous son-of-Satan. I have to grow a goatee and dye my hair reddish-black.”

“You?” I said

“Yes, can you believe it?”

Sadly, I could. Such sometimes is the price of success.

END

"Local Boy Makes Evil" was published in A Collection of Nickel-plated Angels, 2008.  It is loosely based on a human story I knew about.  What enthralled me was the connection between success and worldly knowledge, a situation that is true to life, although one about which most parents warn their children.  People who gain success and fame as children sometimes miss this lesson as many Hollywood child stars and one super athlete can attest.

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Friday, August 13, 2010

Buck must find two missing college students Ch. 2



Encomienda

Chapter 2




The next day Caridad had just opened the office when I came up the stairs. I could see her and Vlad going inside. The door had just clicked shut when I opened it again.

“Good morning, guys.”

Caridad said, “Hello, Buck. I got coffee on the way in.”

“Chocolate Mocha?”

“Of course.”

“Great. Vlad, how are ya?”

“A little sleepy, but fine.” He had mousy brown hair and a sallow complexion as if he had been living too near Chernobyl. But, I never said that to his face; he was Russian and would revile the notion that he was Ukrainian.

“Grab a coffee and come into my office.”

Vlad was one of the many Russian immigrants who lived in South Florida. His reasons for coming were intriguing. As a kid, he’d been drawn to espionage, so when he got to Moscow University, he studied English, computer programming, cryptology and electronic engineering. Unfortunately, the year was 1989 and the spy business was about to crash. So, after doing some odd computer programming, he came to the States in 1995.

In 1996, he answered my want ad for an electronic surveillance operative, and I’ve been using him ever since. I recommend him to others whenever electronics can be part of the solution, so he works fairly regularly, which is fine with him. As he puts it, “Nine to five was never for Vlad. But give Vlad a puzzle, Vlad’s happy all the day long.”

I filled him in on the missing boys. “What I want you to do is get into Nano’s computer because I think we can find some clues there.”

“Sure. Can do that.”

I called Señor Concepción to let him know we were on our way. Vlad said he’d follow me in his van. “I’ve got my gear in it. Never know what is needed.”

I picked Señor Concepción up in my Z3 and drove us to the South Bay Apartments, with Vlad tagging behind us in the van. The apartments were fairly simple places designed for modest incomes. I introduced Vlad to Concepción outside the manager’s office. When the manager, a stocky Latino, came to the door, he squinted at us through the bright morning sunlight. We didn’t look like potential renters. He said, “Yes?” I explained who I was, showed my identification, introduced Nano’s father, showed the missing person’s report. “Ok, I guess it’s all right for you to look inside the apartment. By the way, the rent’s due this week.”

“I’ll pay it, “Concepción said.

“Follow me.” The manager slapped barefoot up some stairs to the third floor and let us into Apartment 329. The door opened onto a spacious two-bedroom, one-bath apartment. The long living room ended with sliding glass doors leading onto a balcony that had room for a table and several chairs set among potted plants. A doorless doorway on the right led to a kitchen and dining area. The two bedrooms were on the left; each had a desk and PC.

I said, “Vlad, boot both. Señor Concepción, which is your son’s room?”

“It’s the one next to the balcony.”

We went in and I looked around. Posters of musical groups on the wall. A soccer ball next to the bed. A nine-by-twelve-inch frame held a photograph of a palomino on whose back sat a very proud Mexican boy. Some candid photographs lay on the desk. I picked them up. They were of a young man; like Señor Concepción, he was a mestizo with reddish skin, but his hair was curly brown. He had brown European eyes but his nose and cheeks could have been Aztec or Mayan. “Is this your son?”

“Yes.”

“Nice looking.” Just as I said that, there was a knock on the door. Concepción went to the door, opened it and found the manager holding an armful of envelopes, catalogs and magazines. The manager said, “Here’s all the mail – a month’s worth. I thought you might want it. It was clogging up the box.”

“Gracias.” He took it, closed the door and loosed the mail onto the dining room table.

I went there to sort through it. I set aside the one letter to Pablo Menendez: it was from Venezuela, return address to J.L. Menendez. I separated all the bills from the magazines and catalogs and started opening them. I gave the phone and utility bills to Concepción. “I guess you ought to pay these, too.” The VISA, MasterCard, American Express and gasoline credit card bills I went through carefully. I also perused bank statements for both Nano and Paulie. Nano’s was very healthy: over $15,000. Paulie’s wasn’t quite as lush: around $5,500. For college students, they were flush. “How much does Nano’s trust fund pay out each month?”

“Around $2,000.”

“He must be pretty frugal.”

“Yes. He’s not a waster.”

The most interesting item was in Paulie’s statement. On December 6 he had withdrawn $300 from an ATM. That was the last withdrawal before the bill had been sent. Nano’s last ATM withdrawal was $100 on November 28. “When did they leave on the trip?”

“I think it was December seventh or eighth. I spoke to him earlier in the week. He said they were going in two or three days.”

I figured Paulie had withdrawn the $300 for the trip. The more frugal Nano hadn’t spent enough of the $100 so that he needed to withdraw more.

“Bingo!” shouted Vlad from Paulie’s room.

I went in there. “What’cha got?”

“I’m into his files. You can take it from here. Check out whatever you want.”

“That was easy.”

“Well, he kept his ID and password in his calendar. Yeah, for Vlad, it was easy.” He pointed out the numbers written in the notebook part of the calendar.

“Go figure out the other one.”

“Sure thing.”

I sat down and started clicking through Paulie’s files. He was organized. I checked the word document files first. He had everything in the appropriate folders: Classes; Letters; Poesía. I glanced at samples of each one. Classes had outlines and papers in English. Letters had letters in English and Spanish, but none very recent. Poesía had poetry in Spanish but I couldn’t tell if they were his own compositions or just a compendium of his favorite poems.

I hit the Internet account icon and a password screen popped up. I tried the computer password. It took me to the Internet. I clicked on Favorites. The drop-down menu revealed some of the expected – Miami University, Venezuelan Consulate, his online banking site, Amazom.com – and some unexpected – Shakira’s website and a couple XXX sites. I clicked on those to see what he was into, but there was nothing deviant, just young, risk-taking women having sex in the usual ways.

Then I checked his email files. He had a ton of spam from XXX sites. I deleted them all in groups. A series of personal emails were left. The interesting ones were from janicep@hotmail.com. Emails from December 9 and 10 said “Where are you guys? Did you change your minds? What’s going on?” One from December 12 said, “Now we’re really pissed. If you decided not to come, you could’ve told us.” I replied to the one of the twelfth. “My name is Buck Jaspers. I’m a private detective. Paulie and Nano are missing. Please contact me at Jaspers&Marquez@aol.com as soon as you can.” I printed copies of all the emails from janicep.

I went back into the dining room. Concepción was pacing around the living room, so I gave him something to do. “Señor,” I said, “would you go into Paulie’s room and find a photograph that you think looks most like him?”

“Of course,” he said and went.

I picked up the gasoline credit card bills. Paulie had one fill-up from November on an Exxon account. Nano had two charges on his BP card. One from November and one dated December 7. He put in twelve gallons on December 7. That would just about top off a Samurai. The address of the station was West Highway 41, the Tamiami Trail. We had our first good directional clue. I tore off the statement part of the bill and left the payment coupon with the envelope.

I checked the credit card bills. Paulie had one MasterCard with a balance of $4,869.56. Last month’s payment was the minimum, and there were no charges in the past billing cycle. Nano had three cards. An American Express with one small charge at the campus bookstore. A MasterCard with a balance of $59.50 and no charges from the previous month. And a VISA with one charge dated December 7. The charge was for $30.52 at the Everglades Inn in Everglades City. Now we were getting someplace. They drove across the Trail, had lunch in Everglades City and then headed out. Where? West to Naples? North to Tampa? South? No south would be possible only by boat, so if they went south, the Samurai would have been left in Everglades City. What bothered me most was that there were no charges on any bill after December 7. I tore out the statement section of Nano’s VISA bill and put it with the emails and the BP bill.

“Bingo!” Vlad shouted from Nano’s room.

I went in. “You’re on fire today.”

“This was more difficult. His ID was written in an old computer manual at the bottom of his bottom drawer. But the password wasn’t. He might have changed the password. So, Vlad asked Mr. Conception what was the name of the horse in the picture: Conquistador. That was it, but not quite. Vlad needed a combination of eight digits and numbers. Vlad said to himself the numbers one to twenty in Spanish. Uno, dos . . .”

“I know the numbers, Vlad. What was it?”

Quince. C-o-n-1-5-d-o-r. Conquincedor.”

“Very clever.”

“Thanks.”

I sat down and began clicking the files. Nano was more organized than Paulie, but he had no emails from someone expecting him. He had Excel files: tables of investments, budgets, cash flow. His word files were similar to Paulie’s except labeled slightly differently. One paper caught my eye; it was titled “The Evolution of the Encomienda.” The abstract read: “The encomienda system established in Spain’s New World empire never really disappeared but transformed itself, taking on new forms into the twentieth century.” I wrote the word down on a piece of notebook paper and put it into my pocket; I’m always interested in learning new things just like my hero Benjamin Franklin was. Nano’s Internet favorites included Miami University, the Mexican consulate, Amazon.com, all his credit card companies and his bank, and the website of a Mexican League soccer team Los Diablos Rojos de Toluca.

Señor Concepción came in and handed me some photographs. “Here’s a good one of Paulie, and a couple of some girls. They look like students. Perhaps the boys were going to visit those girls.”

I took the photos. “Good work. You might make a good detective.”

He smiled briefly, but his face regained its tension quickly.

“I see Nano is a fan of Los Diablos Rojos.”

“Oh, si, he loves 'Pepe' Cardozo.”

Then on the pull down menu of most recent usage, there was a visit to MapQuest.com. Nano had looked for an address on MapQuest. Had probably printed out the map. Knowing that the first map is not always the best one, I looked in the trashcan. Sure enough. A sheet of paper had a map printed. The red star was resting on Dolores Street in Tampa, but it didn’t have much detail. He had probably zoomed in and printed and taken a more detailed map. I added the map to my collection.

On the ride back I filled in the details for Concepción. “Tomorrow, I’ll drive to Everglades City to see if I can find some more traces of their journey.”


END of Chapter 2

Nano has a BP credit card.  This was written before BP's well spilled into the Gulf of Mexico; now the government of Mexico has filed a suit against BP.  Below are items related to this chapter, including a link to Futbol Club Toluca, which just happens to be the 2010 League Champions of Mexico.  I'm a fan of Shakira, especially after I learned last year that she is building and staffing charter schools in the slums of Colombia to give the children a means to create a better society.  Jose 'Pepe' Cardozo (a Paraguayan) achieved American Footballer of the Year while playing for the Red Devils.

 Los Diablos Rojos de Toluca

Thursday, August 12, 2010

What do the rooms signify in Edgar Allen Poe's short story "The Masque of the Red Death"?



Arrangement and decoration colors of rooms east to west in Prospero’s Castellated Abbey in Edgar Allan Poe’s “The Masque of the Red Death”







The seven rooms could represent any or all of the following:

1. The seven stages of life as laid out by Shakespeare in As You Like It.

     a. This concept resonates because Poe has named his prince Prospero, one of the leading characters of The Tempest. Prospero is a wizard/king who has control of his island and admits only those he wishes to be there.

     b. The clock in the last room announces the end of each stage, causing all to pause from their revelry

     c. The last room is where everyone dies.

2. The passage of time as represented by the light of the sun from morning to night, night being the end of day and/or life.

3. The Seven Deadly Sins is a classification of the most objectionable vices, that has been used since early Christian times to educate and instruct followers concerning (immoral) fallen man's tendency to sin. It consists of "Lust," "Gluttony," "Greed," "Sloth," "Wrath," "Envy," and "Pride"—all of which occur in the fortress.

     a. This concept resonates because of Poe’s use of biblical language.

          i. “comes like a thief in the night”

          ii. Allusions to the Red Death as an antichrist, an inverted Christ

     b. Contrast these with the seven holy virtues: chastity, temperance, charity, diligence, patience, kindness, and humility—none of which happen inside the fortress.

4. The seven days of the week, which are named in English after gods, but not God.

     a. Sun-day: the day of the Sun (Sp. Domingo)

     b. Mon-day: the day of the Moon (Sp. Lunes, Roman moon)

     c. Tues-day: Tiwes’ Daeg, the day of the war god, Norse mythology (Sp. Martes, the day of Mars, the Roman god of war)

     d. Wednes-day: Woden’s Daeg, the day of the chief god (Sp. Miercoles)

     e. Thurs-day: Thor’s Daeg, the god of thunder and lightning (Sp. Jueves, the day of Zeus, who also controlled thunder and lightning)

     f. Fri-day: Frigga’s Daeg, the goddess of marriage (Sp. Viernes-Venus’ day)

     g. Satur-day: Saturn’s day, Roman mythology (Sp. Sabado, Sabbath)
  
This blog is based on an answer that I provided to Answer.com in 2009.
 
 
 
Edgar Allen Poe is a fascinating character and one of America's best and most influential writers of the 19th century.  If I were to compile a list of favorite stories, I would probably include "The Masque of the Red Death," "The Tell-Tale Heart," "The Cask of Amontillado," "The Pit and the Pendulum" and "The Fall of the House of Usher"--all written by Poe.  He invented the detective story and is a master of the horror story.  His poetry has had a great influence on poetry around the globe.  His most famous poem "The Raven" has been translated into almost every other language; in fact, you can find these translations on the Web.  I spent one day searching and found dozens of translations in African, Asian, Native American and European languages.  Many of the translations rhymed, but none could capture Poe's rhthym, although a Spanish version came close.
 
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Wednesday, August 11, 2010

a story from the apocrypha reexamined


Judith Beheading Holofernes, Caravaggio

FOR APOCRYPHAL JUDITH

ON SAINT VALENTINE’S DAY


Holofernes, he waited
Filled with animal lust
He thought would be sated,
Waited as he must


For the comely widowed
Beauty bathed afresh,
Oiled her braids sowed
With scents, and meshed


Her bejeweled diadem
With her finest garments,
Flowed toward lustful him,
The man of armaments –


Already she had trapped
The General with her wiles:
Her flattery wrapped
Him around her smiles,


Her lips, her hair, her eye;
Her daily prayer so common,
Her holy food so nigh
And bundled – so human


Was he, so much a man,
That he could not fathom
His death at such a hand;
He saw only his bastion


That could not be breached.
He opened to her wide
And gave; she reached
Beyond his drunken side


And grasped his sword,
Prayed and slew him.
Beheaded him with a word
Carried his head in the dim,


Past unsuspecting guards:
To save her people
And revenge her Lord,
Her life: a temple.


[It’s not that simple.
She, after all, severed head,
Spilled blood and ample,
Deceived and left one dead.

 
How many holy rules
Did she willing break?
Pride, contempt of fools,
Vanity, lies, all in wake

Of hatred--revenge God
Claims his sole right--
Flim-flam, seduction. Odd
She be deemed a light



To her own people, but
She had one final grace:
Instead of glorifying strut,
Penance, a hidden face.]

2006


"For Apocryphal Judith on St. Valentine's Day" was included in the unpublished collection Operose Hierodule of the Muse, 2008.  I've always found intriguing the stories left out of the official protestant canon of scripture.  What stories are being told?  Why weren't they included?  My poems about these stories are quests for the answers.  Below are items related to this blog.

Tuesday, August 10, 2010

the father of modern philosophy


The statue of Spinoza in the Hague


SPINOZA DICTA


“God is only Nature,”
Thought he in his eye lab.
“All things are one creature.”


Growing in a pasture
Viewed from a grassy tab,
God is only Nature.


Atomic essence immature
He ponders there to grab
All things are one creature.


Attributes essential, pure
Develop from one stab –
God is only Nature.

That god in us is sure;
Despite a genetic dab,
All things are one creature.


We can grow; such a lure
Rips us from paternal gab.
God is only Nature –
All things are one creature.

2008
 
"Spinoza Dicta" is a villanelle that was included in the unpublished work An Operose Hierodule of the Muse, 2008.  Spinoza is often labeled the first modern philosopher because he is the first to lose the idea of a separate God the Creator.  His idea is that we are all part of god.  He is my favorite because so much of what he thought has influenced all other philosophers after him, including the ideas of democracy adhered to by the founding fathers of the United States of America.
 
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Wednesday, August 4, 2010

Buck must find two missing college students


ENCOMIENDA

1



Evil appears in various guises; that’s why Satan wears a cloak. Each devil protects his particular hellish domain with a vengeance born of jealousy, malice and suspicion. I would learn that lesson on this case.

I had warmed and was eating a plate of lechón con moros y cristianos and yuca that my partner Ruben’s wife Luli had sent me after the Christmas holidays. This was off my normal diet, but it was tasty, and I vowed as I ate to work out doubly hard that afternoon. My two cats Franklin and Churchill rubbed against my legs, gentle, carnivorous hints that they were willing to share the food.

Then the phone rang. When I picked up the receiver, Caridad’s familiar voice said, “Hóla, Boss. You got a phone call from a potential client.”

I mumbled between chews, “Yeah? Who’z id?”

“You ok? You sound funny.”

“Eadin’.”

“Oh, geez, sorry, Buck. You want me to call back later?”

I swallowed everything in my mouth . . . “No. Now, who is it?”

“He’s Mexican, but his Spanish is very educated. His name is Jesus Maria Concepción y Carvajal.”

“Don’t know him.”

“He said we were recommended by someone at Miami University.”

“Oh.”

“He said his son is missing and he wants us to find him.”

“Did you give him our standard rates?”

, and he said it was no problema. So, I set up an appointment for this afternoon. You were coming back today, weren’t you?”

I hesitated, but since I knew Ruben was out taking his kids to the Three Kings Parade, I said, “Sure. What time’s the appointment?”

“Four.”

“I’ll be there.”

* * * *

I was in no hurry. I finished the meal. Gave a few tidbits to Franklin and Churchill – I don’t usually because I know it’s not good for them . . . but once in a while. It’s the holidays after all. I got to the office at 1223 Bolero in South Miami about five minutes to four, not expecting to see Señor Concepción.

But he was there: a tall, thin white-haired man wearing a white guayabara over khaki pants and brown loafers. He turned to me as I entered the door. His narrow face held anxious brown eyes. “Mr. Jaspers?”

“Yes. It’s Concepción, isn’t it?” We shook hands and I gestured toward my office. “Go in, have a seat. Cari, can you come in, please?”

She was already standing with her pencil and pad and began moving on my request. What employees I have!

Mr. Concepción was from another culture, so I tried to guess his age. In our culture, he could pass for mid-seventies, but he could have been a decade younger than that.

I gestured for him to sit and sat myself in my desk chair behind my cherry wood desk. He sat. As Caridad took her seat to take notes, I said, “Caridad said that your son is missing. How is he missing?”

He spoke slowly but his pronunciation was good enough that I surmised he must have gone to university in the States. “He is a student at Miami University. His name is Fernando Vicente Concepción. Everyone calls him Nano. He’s a good boy, a good student. But he never came home for Christmas. He never returned to school. So, he’s been missing almost a month. That’s the last time anyone saw him. His roommate Paulie is missing, also. He and Paulie left for vacation together. Neither returned.”

“Do you know where they were going?”

“Nano said they were going to visit some friends, but I don’t remember their names. I’m not sure Nano named them.”

“Have you been in Nano’s room at the university?”

“No. He and Paulie have an apartment off the campus. I went there, but nobody answered the bell.”

“How were they traveling?”

“I think they took Nano’s car. It’s not at the apartment.”

“What kind of car is it?”

“A red and white Toyota Samurai.”

“Does Nano use credit cards?”

“Yes. He has a trust fund from his grandfather, so he’s financially independent. He doesn’t have a lot of cards, but he likes them more than carrying cash. He said it’s safer in Miami that way.”

“Sounds like a level-headed kid.”

“Yes, he is. He has never been out of touch this long, so that’s why I’m worried. It’s not like him.”

“Does he have a cell phone?”

“Yes.”

“A PC?”

“Yes.”

“Internet access?”

“Yes.”

“Do you know his roommate?”

“I met him only once. His name is Pablo Menendez; he’s Venezuelan. I believe his father is a businessman. He seems like a good person. I was relieved that he was Nano’s friend. He seemed responsible, not foolish or wild like some college students.”

“Have you filed a missing person’s report with the police?”

“Yes, I filed it yesterday after I found no one at the apartment.”

“Good. Ok, Señor Concepción, we’ll take your case. I should tell you that the police might find the boys before we do, and then you would’ve spent your money for nothing.”

“I don’t think so. If Nano has been gone so long, I don’t think the police will find him very easily. I think I need someone like you.”

“Very well. Do you have a copy of the missing person’s report with you?”

“Yes, in my pocket.”

“Good. Give Caridad Nano’s address, phone number, social security number if he has one, cell phone number. Give her your address and phone number in Miami, too. And let her copy the missing person’s report. Tomorrow, I would like you to go with me to Nano’s apartment. Can you do that?”

“Of course.”

“Give her the consultation fee and retainer, too. She’ll have a contract for you to sign.”

Before he left, he stood and pointed at the framed portrait behind my head. He said, “Isn’t that Benjamin Franklin, the one who flew the kite and discovered electricity?”

“Yes, it is.”

“Unusual for a detective’s office. Is he your hero?”

“Yes, he’s one of my favorite people. But, I don’t think his being here is so unusual. He was a person who loved mysteries, especially of the scientific and psychological kind, and he was a wonderful businessman, and our agency is a business. We solve mysteries, but we try to make a profit while we do it.”

“I see. You must be good at it.”

Caridad chimed in, “Somos el mejor de South Florida.”

We shook hands and he left.

After he left, I had Cari call Vlad, Jose and Shamir to see who was available the next day. She reported a few minutes later. “Vlad is the only one not committed tomorrow. He’s on hold. Do you want to talk to him?”

“No. Just tell him that I’ve got work for him tomorrow and to be here at 8 a.m. and to bring his thinking cap. We’ll need him to get into a computer.”

END of Chapter One.

After re-reading this chapter, I understand why readers like it.  The mystery is something that can touch anyone: a missing child; and Buck seems like a likable, professional detective.  His humanity shows.

When a writer hasn't seen a piece of work in a while and re-reads it, it almost seems as if someone else wrote it.  That fact that I got into the story and the characters pleases me.  It is the kind of narrative that I will probably like.

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