Saturday, May 28, 2011

First Writing Rite




JUST PUBLISHED! THE FIRST YEAR OF THE BLOG COLLECTED AND ARRANGED BY GENRE.

I had begun to get offers from publishers to publish my blog, and those offers sparked me to thinking how I would arrange my first year's blog if I did publish it.  The easiest arrangement would have been chronological order as each blog was published, but I realized that I had published four different genres of writing: (1) nonfiction: journalistic writing, essays, and reports; (2) poetry; (3) short stories; and (4) a novel.  Therefore, I decided to group them under the four general categories but leave them chronological within each category.

I decided to go with an 8x10, full-color layout because such would most resemble the blog itself.  The book came to 396 pages.  "Part One," pages 1-45, contains the 15 nonfiction pieces loosely grouped under the heading "Essays" because the majority qualify as such, although some are reports or ruminations more than well-structured essays. "Part Two," pages 45-169, holds 80 poems, most of which are my originals and previously published in other publications, and I give some background and/or explanations of these poems.  Thirty of the poems are my translations from Spanish (15) and French (15). "Part Three," pages170-268 consists of 11 short stories, some of my favorites from the two published collections: A Collection of Nickel-plated Angels and Touch Me.  "Part Four," pages 269-396, is one novel Encomienda, the second mystery in the Buck Jaspers series.  It is my favorite of the first three mysteries before Buck becomes wealthy and famous.



When I got the proof copy and reviewed it, I realized that the book would make a decent textbook for a creative writing class.  It has plenty of examples with background and explanations of how the pieces originated.  If ever privileged to teach such a course again, I might use it, along with the PowerPoint that I also created: "Notes for Writers"; and the syllabus for CRW2001.

Friday, May 27, 2011

Putkwyz, Ch.13, "Aldeman"



13



Aldeman


For the mission to Radimeer, Mawgri and I both donned all our armor and helmets and prepared our weapons. I had thought I would have a surprise for him. After my adventure on Mount Zaput, I had taken Hennessey’s force-field belt, cleaned it, replaced the batteries and set it to charge. Yesterday, I tested it and found it unusable; the centuries had turned it into little more than an amusement—a greenly, intermittently flickering belt that gave no protection. Nonetheless, I resolved that if we got into a deadly situation, I would take him into my sphere of protection.

Instead, Mawgri had a surprise for me: Luvark had joined us on orders from Sacacon, and had been taking lessons in flying Mawgri’s ships. Mawgri’s ships were completely digital, so learning to fly them was more a matter of inputting data than actually steering, except for landings. Our ship was a lighter from the freighter and carried supplies for the rebels and the four of us: Mawgri, Luvark, Adelman, and me. Luvark was our pilot.

When I saw Luvark’s strong green-and-yellow-scaled form armored and armed, I wanted to run to him and hug him, but I knew that would embarrass him. Instead, I saluted and said, “Luvark, I’m glad you’re coming with us. I feel more secure now.”

“Thank you, Za Malcolm. It is my honor to serve you.”

“Have you heard anything more of the war?”

“Yes, we have beaten back the Radimeen at Milisaca, and they are running away and fearing our attack. They are running from Kunwyz, too. And on their own continent, they are making no more headway against Sobimeer and Polimeer.” I can’t swear to this, but I thought I saw the slightest hint of a smile on his lips.

However, I had no more time to chat, for Mawgri began to review our operation. “It’s fairly simple. We go in at a rendezvous point, drop Aldeman to his supporters. Then we unload all the boxes in the hold. Then we leave as quickly as we can—in and out. I don’t think we’ll have any trouble in flight because our approach should be stealthy. What little radar Radimeer has is concentrated along the coasts facing its enemies. I don’t think we’ll be spotted in the air.”

“If trouble happens on the ground, our instructions are the same: unload and get away. But, you may shoot back if fired upon.”

Luvark got into the pilot’s seat. Mawgri sat next to him as copilot and commander. Aldeman and I sat in back. Aldeman had no personal armor, but Mawgri insisted that he put on an armored vest and helmet. “We don’t want to take unnecessary chances.”

Mawgri gave Luvark the altitude he wanted and the direction and then gave him the landing coordinates. Luvark put all that data into the lighter’s computer. When all was ready, he pushed a yellow button and we began to ascend smoothly into the quickly darkening sky.

I asked Aldeman how big his organization was.

“It is bigger than you might think. The Emperor Kra of Radimeer has imposed a harsh, militaristic rule for many years. He has been particularly harsh on minorities, so any Polimeens, Winimeens or Sobimeens inside his borders have no love for him. In the place we are going is a large minority called Takimeens that have been particularly brutalized. I know; I am a Takimeen. Then within the general population, there are millions who hunger for freedom. Also with us are millions who worship Zacon, not the official religion. The Emperor says, ‘You are with us or against us’; many say, ‘If so, then we are against the emperor.’ But we are suppressed, exiled, beaten, imprisoned or killed. We have had enough and are willing to fight back. Now is the right time because we will have aid and support from strong allies who are enemies of Radimeer.”

“Good luck.”

”Thank you. I know you are risking your lives on this mission.”

Then I felt the ship slow and begin its descent, and the land below was lit by the light reflected off the large moon Huppof. As we descended, I could see that the territory of the Takimeen was a prairie of rolling grassy hills with forests around lakes and rivers and streams, a kind of violet Kansas. Then I could discern the segmentation of farms and small towns.

Luvark settled us gently into a recess surrounded by hills.

We all unbuckled, Mawgri opened the hatch, and he and Luvark went out. He motioned for us to follow. Luvark opened the cargo hold, and we all laid aside our weapons and began pulling the heavy boxes out and stacking them on the ground.

Then Aldeman shouted a greeting. I looked up and saw about twenty Putkurs descending toward us from the northernmost hill. These set about helping us with the cargo, so in just a few minutes, all the boxes were stacked on the ground.

One box had been opened, and automatic assault rifles were being passed around until all the arrivals were armed. Then ammunition and hand grenades were distributed. Mortars and rocket launchers were also taken and carried away. More Putkurs poured in from the other hills. Soon over a hundred had been armed and were leaving. The first group to arrive was the first to leave.

Aldeman came over and said, “I am going now. Thank you, Mawgri. We will never forget you.” The two licked each other, and Aldeman joined the first group as they exited the hollow.

Over the hill came others in lines and bunches, for the supply of ammunition and weapons was not exhausted.

Mawgri stepped beside me and Luvark and said, “Ok, our job is done. Let’s get out of here before it gets hot.”

Luvark said, “The sun will not rise for many hours.”

“That’s not what I’m talking about.”

At that very moment, a shot rang out and a bullet whizzed by us. I looked from where the cracking shot echoed and saw that over the western hill was a squad of uniformed soldiers heading toward us. Their gray uniforms were highlighted by the moonlight from Huppof. A patrol had found us. More shots rang out. More bullets zinged overhead.

We all pulled our weapons and fired back, but I was unable to see any effects. I knew that at that range my pulse gun was not lethal because the pulse would spread, but it would cause disorientation and a feeling of nausea and weakness in all the soldiers. Suddenly from the northern hill erupted a staccato of bullet fire that ripped like a hailstorm into the small Radimeen patrol squad and silenced it quickly and left sprawled gray bodies upon the plum-colored grass. Luvark, Mawgri and I hurried into the lighter, closed the hatch and got ready. Luvark pushed the yellow button and the craft ascended straight up to several hundred meters.

“Stop here,” Mawgri said and checked his visual screen, selected night vision mode and scanned the area. To the west several kilometers away, we could see a line of some forty armored vehicles coming down a road. Some were tanks; others were troop transports. “This is not good. I think we’re going to have to perform some direct intervention. We can’t have the rebellion squashed before it has a chance to get started.”

He picked up his communicator and spoke quickly, ordering two of his ships that had been hovering above us to descend. Still high above us, the silver ovals halted and began to shoot laser beams at the convoy. One hit the first vehicle and one hit the rear vehicle; both vehicles exploded and burned. Then both beams walked from opposite ends slowly to the middle of the trapped convoy until every vehicle had erupted into flames. Then the ships disappeared upward as quickly as they had come.
“That evens the odds. The Takimeens have a fighting chance now. Let’s go.”

Actually, as it turned out, that one mysterious decimation of a Radimeer fighting column more than evened the odds. Because the Radimeen had such a low literacy rate, most of the soldiers were prone to superstition. The survivors of that attack claimed that Zacon had shown his wrath against the Radimeen for starting the war and also showed that Zacon was superior to Za, the god of the emperor. This rumor spread quickly through the Radimeen ranks despite the efforts of the officer corps to squelch it. This sea change in belief gave the believers in Kandizam hope; many illiterate troops converted and brought their weapons with them. Every enclave of Zacon worshippers became an armed camp.

Moreover, the victory, claimed by the Takimeen, spurred that ethnic group to greater efforts. Now armed and reinforced by their sons who were deserting in droves from the emperor’s military and bringing their weapons with them, the Takimeen attacked outpost after outpost in their territory until the depleted Radimeen ranks were driven out. The final Radimeen post, a major airbase and army fort, was abandoned without a fight. Now the Takimeen had a small air force and artillery. Most importantly for the war, the Takimeen territory was the breadbasket of Radimeer; without its food, hunger rose as a specter throughout the rest of the empire.

Heartened by these events, the other minorities—Sobimeen, Polimeen, and Winimeen—also deserted, returned to their home territories, and rebelled against their oppressors. Because of food shortages, even the Radimeen faithful became disgusted and desperate, and food riots began. The Empire of Radimeer became a land of chaos; the emperor, a prisoner inside his palace in his capital.

The return of the defeated fleets intensified the anger of the disaffected. The ally Ladimeer, understanding what was happening to Radimeer, sued for a separate peace and withdrew its forces from Cosimeer. Within days, the Empire of Radimeer was no more as various ethnic and religious groups established their own states and minorities related to other states joined their regions together.

Not knowing that any of this would happen, we soared up and back to the island where our command ship waited.

When we arrived, we were very hungry and had the ship cook fix us smagos chops with taloos and rul nuts and nectar fruit. After everyone had belched and sighed, we retired to our quarters for a nap.

End of Chapter 13.

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Thursday, May 26, 2011

A criminal moves in next door



Spooked


We had thought
The pulled shades were lidded eyes;
The face of the house, weary walls,
Beleaguered by a fearful light.


We thought that they shied
From eyes that jangled
At the clash of his carbon skin
With her pale parchment,
And the chocolate child.


But strange it was
When he insinuated his gun
As if it were a bigger organ
Than the one that spit out the child—
A steel rod with lead sperm
That suck life rather than be it.


We thought he struggled long hours,
Coming home so the sun’s eye
Blinked open when he closed
The door behind his night.


Then, the police,
Crime parasites,
Swarmed the house.
In their love to hate him,
I learned that unzipped
Morality fed the darkness.
And cops, symbiotic,
Came to claim him as their own.


Not the façade,
But the depths were somber.


5/18/1981

"Spooked" was first published in Monsters in a Half-way House, 1981  The plural personae are watching the strange behavior of the new neighbors. 

At the time, I and my calico cat Butterfly were rooming with Judy Leigh and her border collie in a house near the zoo and Hillsborough River in Tampa.  We all got along well, but one day we noticed that new neighbors had moved in across the street:  a black man, a white woman, and their child. 

Although I said "good morning" and "hello" when I encountered them; they were very stand-offish as if they didn't want to interact with the neighbors.  Judy and I discussed why they would be unfriendly and decided that being a mixed couple made them suspicious of the intentions of others.  Besides, the man seemed to work at night, so he was coming home while Judy and I were leaving for work in the mornings.

Then one day I watched the man come home and intentionally let me see a large pistol that he carried in his belt.  We were happy to ignore them after that display.

A week or so later, a police SWAT team surrounded the house and went in force inside the house and brought out the black man in handcuffs.  He must have been a hard character to warrent such attention.

The wife and child moved out within a week, but we never discovered what the black man's crimes had been.

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Tuesday, May 24, 2011

Windfall: A Buck Jaspers Mystery: Book Ten




NEWLY PUBLISHED!

Windfall, the tenth in the series of Buck Jasper mystery novels, was published in April 2011.

This mystery is an inversion of most mysteries, for Buck's clients are criminals and his suspects are ordinary citizens.  Coerced into helping the thugs find their missing money and goods, Buck has to run down whoever stumbled onto the cache and carried it away.

Buck's family has grown, and it is a threat to his family that gets him to cooperate with the underworld, but, of course, Buck tries to work the deal in a way that spares the innocent and traps the guilty.

The trail takes him to the Everglades, and brings back two characters from the second Buck Jaspers mystery, Encomienda:  Hernando Suarez, then a lieutenant, now police chief of Stoke City; and Iris, then a teenaged hitchhiker, now an Iraq veteran studying criminology.


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Saturday, May 21, 2011

One True Love 36



15



Your features like your colors

Are forever

Fading and dissolving

And shimmering anew

In varied hues

And volumes and folds –

Layers and layers

Receding and resurging –

Flashes of the hidden you

Behind the terraced avenues,

Beneath the arabesque shadows

Of trees –

Like an Escher print

You present all

Sides and angles, and which

End is up is never known.

 
"15, Your features like your colors" was first published in Two Wholes Make It Total, 1978.  The persona expresses the mystery presented by his new true love.  This poem is the last of fifteen for the new true love; both he and she knew that their union was not permanent, that they were meant to be together for the things they had to learn, that each buoyed the other for a new life centered on their lives' missions.
 
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Friday, May 20, 2011

Putkwyz, Ch.12, "Oceana"




12



Oceana



The next morning we were driven to the suburbs, found our ship, boarded and got ready for the next leg of Mawgri’s business trip. A Putkur passenger also boarded; his scales were white and gray, a color combination that I had not see before, and he wore a simple brown wool bodysuit, a wool cape and hood, and plain, unpolished brown boots. He was shown to his quarters, which were across the corridor from mine, but he kept to himself. I was reluctant to talk to him without an introduction, not knowing who he was.

Mawgri had my camera’s contents fed into a printer that printed the full English version of The Logbook of Captain Christopher Hennessey. As soon as he had dispatched the manuscript by messenger to President Komplas, he gave the order to go and our ship rose with the fifty others into the peaceful stratosphere far above the fighting.

I followed Mawgri into the communications room where he once again used the large digital screen to view the planet. We saw in succession Radimeer’s western fleet retreating back to its home continent, Radimeer’s northern fleet likewise retreating, Ladimeer’s fleet retreating, and Ladimeer’s coastal cities burning. Buoyed by the news of the defeat of the invasion fleets against Saca and Kunwyz and the attack on Ladimeer, Polimeer and Sobimeer stood firm, knowing now that they could receive aid from their powerful allies.

Mawgri scanned into the Foaming Sea, an uninhabitable area a hundred kilometers east of Ladimeer. He suspected that the Foaming Sea had been the staging area for Kunwyz’s surprise attack. On the western edge of the foaming sea was a gigantic reef that ran the length of the continent and blocked any ships going east. Twenty-five kilometers east of the reef was the beginning of an archipelago of low islands formed by volcanic activity. Those islands were actually the tips of volcanoes, and the area was constantly bubbling and steaming and smoking, hence the name the Foaming Sea. The smoke and steam created a hot smog bank that drifted between the islands and the reef.

Between the islands and the reef was a deep-water trough, a canyon that dropped a kilometer below the sea. On that deep stable water a fleet could rest and be camouflaged by the drifting smog bank and protected by the reef on one side and the hot lava archipelago on the other.

Directly opposite Ladimeer, he spotted Kunwyz’s fleet: five large seaplane tenders plus twenty tankers and freighters and a dozen warships protecting their flanks nestled in the Foaming Sea. A western wind had blown the smog bank over the volcanic islands and revealed the clandestine fleet. Mawgri zoomed in until we could make out submarines taking on more missiles from the freighters and two-engine bombers being armed and fueled near the tenders.

Mawgri said, “They seem to be arming for another attack. I’m sure Ladimeer has sent scout planes to try to find them.”

“But wouldn’t the scout planes have been sent out at the crack of dawn?”

“Yes.”

“Then it’s possible that the fleet was covered by the smog bank at the time any scout planes flew over the area.”

“True. In fact, the smog bank would not only make the fleet invisible, it would hinder refueling and re-arming, which is why in late morning the fleet is just now getting ready for another attack.”

Our ship descended. We were evidently at our first destination.

Mawgri said, “You will enjoy this stop. Come with me.”

I went with him. “Where are we?” I asked.

“In the middle of a group of islands along the equator. The other ships have deliveries to make, but we can take some time to relax.” The hatch before him opened and he stepped down onto a sandy beach. I followed him.

The air was humid and warm; the sky, pale blue with scudding clouds. He tore off his clothing and rushed down to the water while I watched his muscular form receding. I shed my uniform and my shoes, and then my underwear. I folded everything and lay the clothing atop the shoes.

I strolled down to the water’s edge. Mawgri was already in and swimming. I waded in slowly, feeling the cool surf swirl around my legs. When the water was up to my waist, I lowered myself into it until it covered my head. Then I swam parallel to the shore. For a while I felt like I was on Earth again, swimming in the Gulf of Mexico or the Caribbean Sea. I had not had such massive liquidity around me while I moved smoothly through it for a long time. The only swimmable water on Mars was in man-made swimming pools, and starships used water only for cooking, drinking and bathing and rationed it strictly. I luxuriated in the ocean’s cool, smooth wash.

Then I felt something brush against me and I splashed up and began striding toward shore—I had no idea what kinds of creatures inhabited the oceans of Putkwyz.

Behind me came laughter and Mawgri’s voice, “It’s just me. You were so self-absorbed that I couldn’t resist surprising you. I’m sorry I frightened you. Come back!”

I splashed water at his grinning face and went back in, but I asked, “What creatures does a swimmer on Putkwyz have to be aware of?” We rested with the water up to our necks while he explained.

“In the equatorial region, nothing big comes close to shore, so your life is not endangered. The worst that could happen is your stepping on a poison seabed crawler, but they don’t come after you. It would be an accident. There are also stinging jellyfish to avoid. To my knowledge, none of those stings would be fatal, but you would become very ill for a few days until the toxins are controlled and expelled by your immune system.

“Deep water is another story. Deep water holds quite a few terrors. There are mingos and paukos.

“Mingos are broad-finned, long-necked, air-breathing saurians. They swim in packs, and often hunt in packs; they are quite intelligent. Pups raised in captivity can learn tricks and bond with Putkurs, although they are usually released as adults since they can be very large and difficult to control. They vary greatly in size and coloring, depending on the species. I’ve heard that their meat is very tasty, but I’ve never eaten any. They have been known to attack Putkur fishermen if caught in a net, but have also been known to shepherd Putkurs to safety in the water.

“Paukos are very large fish with large heads and powerful jaws and sharp teeth. They are solitary hunters and gather in groups only for mating. They eat almost anything they can catch, but have a preference for certain types of fish.

“Those two are the most dangerous for Putkurs as they roam near the surface. If a Putkur dives deep, then there are other dangers: dagger fish and vacuum monsters.

“By the way, the Foaming Sea and the adjacent deep trough are the ocean’s most fertile breeding ground, from the smallest creatures to the largest. We leave the deep trough alone because it spawns such a great variety and massive amount of fish that can be harvested elsewhere. You might say that area is the fisherman’s engine.”

“Does this island have a name?”

“Not that I know of. It’s tiny and has no permanent fresh water source and thus no inhabitants except birds and insects.”

Suddenly he pulled me to him and kissed me and made the water around me boil. “Why did you do that?”

“I felt like it. You look so delicious with your wet hair and smooth skin.”

“Why don’t some of your crew come down?”

“Have you noticed that they’re rather hairy and wear long sleeves and pants?”

“Yes.”

“The saltwater mats their hair, and they find the equatorial temperature too warm. Sea swimming makes them rather uncomfortable.”

“Why aren’t you as hairy as most Stuwkreen?”

“It’s the Putkur part of me. Would you like to stay on this island a day? I would leave you supplies, food and water for two days, in case we were delayed.”

“Why? Where are you going?”

“I have something I must do, but it’s a bit dangerous, so I’m giving you the option of staying here until I return.”

“What if something happened to you? Then I might as well die myself. No, let me come with you.”

“Are you sure?”

“Yes.”

“Very well. I’m dropping supplies into Radimeer.”

“Radimeer?”

“Yes, to a democratic organization that wants to overthrow the emperor . . . so you understand the danger?”

“Then I’m definitely going. You’ll need someone you can count on for back up. If I’m to die on this planet, let it be in service with you.”

He kissed me again. “Then let’s eat, rest, and prepare ourselves for the mission. Follow me. The seabed is covered with edible creatures.”

He dove into six feet of green water and I went down after him and saw what he was after: large exoskeleton creatures as large as serving platters that were scuttling along the sea floor. They were blue and yellow and had long pincer arms. Mawgri scooped two up by grabbing their rear end in the center and lifting them out of the water, thus avoiding the pincers. I imitated his example and came up with two more. He laid his two on their backs on the sand; the creatures were helpless in that position and could get no traction to right themselves. I laid my catches on their backs as he had done. We each made three more trips until sixteen of the creatures were lying on the beach in the breeze and waving their pincers helplessly about.

Mawgri slapped me on the back and said, “Good work. That should be enough for the entire crew to have platoes for lunch.”

So it was. Despite the crew’s disdain of the warm, salty water, they had no problem eating its creatures. The platoes were boiled, and then cooled, and their now brittle shells cracked apart to reveal thick white meat that was scooped out, quickly sautéed in gwarg butter with salt and slavva and heaped onto platters. The large pincers were also cracked, but left to the eater to open and pull out the juicy white meat. Their flesh had the consistency of lobster flesh, but its tanginess reminded me more of crab meat.

After the crew had eaten, I learned who the mystery passenger was. Mawgri gathered a plate of plato meat, taloos, and wyrd. He covered it, asked me to accompany him, and we went to the passenger’s cabin. Mawgri announced himself and the door opened and we stepped in.

“Good day, Aldeman. I have brought you lunch. Eat, rest, and then we’ll begin our mission.”

Aldeman stood. “Greetings, Mawgri. Thank you.” He looked at me. “Is this the ambassador from the Sol System?”

“Yes, this is Malcolm Talbot. He will come with us.”

Aldeman and I bowed to each other. I said, “Enjoy your lunch, Aldeman.”

Then we left him alone.

On the way to our rooms, Mawgri explained. “Aldeman is an exiled leader of the democratic movement in Radimeer. Part of our mission is to deliver him to his supporters.”

Then we retired to our separate quarters to sleep, although I have to admit that I couldn’t fall asleep right away because of the recent events and questions I had about Mawgri: who he really was and why so many diverse people trusted him. He was more than just a business person, although he obviously was a very successful one. He said that Stuwkreen couldn’t interfere on Putkwyz, yet he constantly involved himself in its politics. Did he feel entitled to interfere because he was part Putkur? But for whom was he working? Sacacon? President Komplas? Aldeman? Or some entity I had yet to encounter?

End of Chapter 12.
 
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Thursday, May 19, 2011

One True Love 35



14



Even your toes

Turn the same way –

All our senses

Are focused toward

Similar ends and beginnings.

Surely some-one-thing

Was directing us

To

The

Same

Point

along similar

Trajectories

From different

Launching pads.

 
"14, Even your toes" was first published in Two Wholes Make It Total, 1978.  The persona expresses his sense that the relationship with the new love was destined.
 
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Sunday, May 15, 2011

One True Love 34



13



My timid heart

Was always a tester of water

Before it went swimming.

Then –

                                   WOOOOSH!

You swept in

And my heart surfaced

Gasping

And finding itself

Immersed again

And

                  Again.

It could only

Kick and stroke

And keep

Its head

Above water.

 
"13, My timid heart" was first published in Two Wholes Make It Total, 1978.  The persona feels overwhelmed by his new true love.
 
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Saturday, May 14, 2011

Putkwyz, Ch11, "In Mikito"



11



In Mikito



By the time we landed in Mikito, the capital of Kunwyz, the war situation had turned considerably in favor of the allies. The Radimeer invasion flotilla of troop transports had been almost entirely wiped out before Milisaca, and the one before the Windy Islands of Kunwyz had been reduced by half and were turning back. Furthermore, one Radimeer aircraft carrier had been hit and was burning near the Windy Isles; the main carrier of Ladimeer had also been badly damaged by attack planes. And Sobimeer and Polimeer were still in the fight, holding on courageously against their militarily stronger enemies.

Mikito sits in the center of Kunwyz, in a high valley surrounded by darkly foliaged mountains. The city rises beautifully constructed of metal and glass in the newer sections, and brick and wood in the older traditional sections. The asphalt streets and stone sidewalks are as clean and orderly as the Kuneen themselves. That Kunwyz is a nation of laws is obvious. The Putkurs of Kunwyz, whose scales are an intriguing mixture of orange and blue, walk proudly as if each of them, male or female, is master of his or her fate. Women are not yet enfranchised, but they, too, are being educated and are beginning to insist on suffrage because they have realized that the males are no more competent and intelligent than they.

For a capital at war, the city moved surprisingly peacefully, with traffic in orderly flow, people walking with the leisurely pace of shoppers or the urgent stride of business people. The few police that were visible in their black uniforms with embroidered badges sat in vehicles or strolled along the walks. The reason for this was that Radimeer had no long-range bombers that could safely reach Mikito and return to Radimeer; that is why Radimeer wanted to seize at least one Windy Island: its medium-range bombers would be in range of all of Kunwyz, and it would be in a position to control sea trading routes.

The one visible sign of a nation united in some urgent cause was the Kuneen flag flying over almost every building: an orange, purple and black banner sloughing gently in the mountain breeze. Orange for courage, purple for strength—the purple part included four triangles representing that Kunwyz was a mountainous country to every point of the compass—and the black was a stylized conifer, the sacred Miki tree whose wood and leaves provided shelter, food and fuel for early Kuneens. Today, every Kuneen household has a bowl of Miki nuts available for snacks and guests.

Mawgri and I left the ship, which departed then to join his merchant fleet delivering supplies to Kunwyz distributors. Standing in the cold mountain air that turned my breath into white puffs, I saw the ships descending, fifty silver ovals lowering into unloading berths at warehouses in the suburbs. (Another reason Radimeer desired a bomber base in range of Mikito.)

A guard led Mawgri and me to a brown car that took us through the clean, ordered streets to a green mansion, whose closely trimmed purple lawn glistened like a frosted carpet. A huge Kuneen flag rippled in the breeze above the green house. We were led up brown steps into a foyer, and from there, a secretary took us through carpeted corridors to the president’s office.

President Komplas was a smaller than average Putkur dressed in a dark blue body suit. He rose and came forward to greet us. “Mawgri, always a pleasure to see you again.” The president and Mawgri hugged briefly, exchanging licks; then Komplas looked at me. “I presume that you are Malcolm, the ambassador from the Sol System that we have been hearing about.” We hugged, Komplas’s tongue running briefly over my forehead, and then he returned to his desk chair. “Sit down, gentlemen.”

As pleasant as the meeting was, I perceived that President Komplas was agitated as any leader would be whose country was in a desperate military situation. He was like a father in a paternalistic land where men were valued but who had only daughters and had to provide a dowry to each successive husband but did not know if his daughter would be happy or if the husband would be a brute who mistreated his young wife. He had to live with a lot of hope mixed with worry.

I said, “I’m sorry to have to arrive under such strained circumstances.”

Komplas waved a hand and said, “And I regret having to receive you during a war, but it was unexpected. We didn’t think Radimeer would do anything for another six months. However, we were on our guard and put the attacking fleets in a snikkee’s nest of counterattacks. (A snikkee is a hive insect with a stinger.)Thanks to . . . uh . . . unnamed sources, we have jet fighters and attack aircraft, which we have kept secret for months. Radimeer’s and Ladimeer’s pilots and ships were totally unprepared for the wave of jets that we sent at them. And after the jets had done their work, we sent a wave of propeller planes, so the attackers would have no rest. And after that, a wave of hydrofoil watercraft with torpedoes and missiles—another secret weapon. Our scientists and engineers have been working overtime to get us ready.

“Can I get you some refreshments?”

Mawgri said, “Just some water would be fine. We ate a large meal an hour ago.”

“There is water on that table. Help yourself.” He pointed to a table behind us, where was not only water but also a bowl of Miki nuts.

Mawgri rose and brought a pitcher and three glasses. He poured for all of us.

I said, “Mr. President, what are the latest reports of the battle?”

He smiled, “They are very good. One aircraft carrier sunk and two damaged. One battleship sunk and several smaller combat ships. But, most importantly, around twenty troop transports have been sunk, so their fleets are turning back.” He leaned forward conspiratorially and said, “In fact, if our admirals’ plans are being carried out, at this moment an attack is being unleashed on Ladimeer’s coastal cities by air and sea by some other secret weapons. I know Mawgri can keep a secret. Can you, Ambassador?”

“Yes, of course, and although ambassadors must be neutral, I admit a certain affinity for Saca and Kunwyz, which are much more like my own federation than is Radimeer.”

“Then I will tell you. We knew we couldn’t build an aircraft carrier and the planes for it in time for an outbreak of war, but our military leaders insisted that we must have some kind of offensive force. After reviewing the options, we found a solution. An air attack force could be built from current aircraft converted from wheels to pontoons for landing in water. And we had five large, fast tankers that were converted into seaplane tenders. Each tender can carry one hundred single-engine planes or sixty two-engine planes or a combination of eighty. Besides that, port-based seaplane bombers and reconnaissance planes can use the tenders for refueling and rearming. We also converted six submarines from torpedoes to missiles for coastal bombardment.

“Those attacks have been launched, so Ladimeer is in for a nasty surprise. Their battle fleet is limping home, and their land-based planes are in bases near Sobimeer in order to attack that ally. Our attack force should have total surprise. Ladimeer will not be able to do much until they have shifted forces back. When they do, they will find damaged and depleted facilities.

“I believe that after today, Ladimeer will regret joining Radimeer in its aggressive war of dominance. In fact, I wouldn’t be surprised if they withdrew their forces from Cosimeer in order to shore up their own defenses. That is our hope anyway.”

Mawgri said, “It is our hope, too. If I may change the subject, Malcolm has information about the religion Kandizam.”

“Oh, what is that?”

I said, “First let me ask what percentage of Kunwyz’s population are worshippers of Zacon.”

“Twenty percent are dedicated worshipers of the traditional faith, but 40 percent are believers who do not take Sacacon as heaven’s representative. They do, however, try to live by the words of Kandi. The words of Kandi have influenced all of us to some degree, even if some of us consider him more a philosopher than a messenger of a supreme being.”

I took a breath and said, “Kandi was actually a citizen of Sol. He was part of an exploration team that crashed on your planet. The unreadable sacred book that was preserved in Sacawyz is actually The Log of Captain Christopher Hennessey of the Golden Hind. I have already read it. Hennessey’s gifts to your planet were his version of laws from several religions of the Sol system and the written language and the ability to read and write that he taught Envak.”

Komplas regarded me a moment with his yellow eyes and scratched his purple scaled chin. Finally, he said, “We are grateful to him. Can the logbook be translated?”

“Of course. I made a copy, and I can send you a copy. I’ll translate the first ten pages into Putkeen with Mawgri’s help. Then I will send that to you. You may use me as a consultant as long as I am in the Za system.”

“And how long will that be?”

“I’m not sure, but at least one circuit of Za.”

“I’ll have scholars work on translating the entire logbook and get it published. It’ll be a crushing blow to some true believers, but I think most will accept it and still value the ideas of Kandi. If not sacred text, his writings can always become literature and a cultural artifact.”

“If you can give us an office to work in, we can work on the first ten pages tonight,” said Mawgri.

The President smiled and pushed a button. Then he said, “I’ll have the secretary give you an office. Since you will be here tonight, dine with me.”

“We would be honored.”

“Eight o’clock. Now excuse me. I have to meet with the generals and admirals.”

“Of course.”

After the president left for the strategy session, the secretary arrived and showed us to a small office in the west wing of the presidential residence. She explained (Yes, in Kunwyz women held jobs), “There are quite a few offices available. Many of the staff are in the federal guard or military reserves and have been called to other duties.” We thanked her and she went out.

I looked around the office and saw only a keyboard in Putkeen and a word processing machine. “How shall we do this?”

Mawgri ran his tongue into my ear, extracted it, and said, “Do you have the book with you?”

Slightly breathless, I breathed, “In my camera.”

“Why don’t you read it to me, and I will type. We can do at least the first ten pages very rapidly. We could do selected pages after that if we have time.”

I pulled up a chair before the desk and pulled out my camera, and Mawgri sat at the word processor. “Whenever you are ready.”

I began to read aloud. As I read the language so familiar to me, I grew nostalgic for the blue skies and green vegetation of earth. The first ten pages went quickly as those first ten days aboard the Golden Hind were relatively routine while Hennessey and the crew settled in for the long flight. I read. Mawgri listened and typed, occasionally stopping to have me clarify a meaning. During those interruptions my mind raced back to my childhood on Earth and my first assignment on Mars.

* * * *

My childhood had been, it seemed in hindsight, an idyllic time. Of course, I had to go to school, but I enjoyed learning and knew that mastering many skills was important. I always felt loved and cared for. We traveled quite a bit, so I had lived in several places on Earth—China, North America, Argentina, Europe. Regardless of where father had been stationed, he always got a residence with comfortable rooms and a green yard. During vacations and holidays, we would tour the countryside and visit historic sites or places of natural beauty. Once, when I was fifteen, I accompanied my father on a mission that took us to Luna and then to Mars. As fascinated as I was by that trip through the black reaches of space, it made me appreciate the beauty and beneficence of our original green and blue planet.

After graduating from a military academy, I was assigned duty on Mars as an embassy guard and a cryptologist. Sol Separatists had been fomenting trouble on the red planet, and the military cooperated with the civilian police to keep an eye on them. Such work sounds interesting as if I would be involved in intrigues, but it was drudge work because the malcontents did more talking than anything risky and exciting.

Despite Mars’ lighter gravity and the leaps and bounds that had been made in terra formation, I found it a depressing environment with its harsh red earth and gloomy yellow skies. The periodic dust storms were particularly enervating and debilitating. In fact, I had been considering volunteering for hazardous terra-formation duty on one of Jupiter’s moons when the starship was announced ready for its trip toward the Crab Nebula and needed crew.

* * * *

In approximately an hour, we had finished the first ten pages of the logbook. Mawgri printed the pages and I looked at them, but they were in Putkeen, so I didn’t really read them. Mawgri read them to me, and I compared what I was hearing with the text of each page in English. Mawgri had done a fine job. Only seven words or phrases had slightly missed the mark, so we went over those until the concepts were clearer and made more exactly true to the English words.

Mawgri said, “Your eyes took on a dreamy look while you read. Did the words make you homesick?”

Surprised at his perspicacity, I said, “Yes. Was it so obvious?”

“Not so, but I’m sensitive to your moods. We have time to do more.”

“Then let’s do these specific pages: 42 and 43, 51-54, 266, 304 and 305. They will give Putkurs a sense of what happened.”

“Another nine pages. Go ahead.”

I read again. Of course, Mawgri had already heard the story once, but hearing the exact words of the text made the story more intense. When those nine pages were done, Mawgri read them to me and we smoothed out a number of words and phrases. He said, “You Earth people are a marvelous species.” As usual, I couldn’t tell if he was being truly admiring or a little teasing, but I cared for him so much that I just smiled and nodded my thanks.

By then it was a quarter to eight. Mawgri gathered the nineteen pages together, found an empty envelope and slid the pages into it. “Let’s go to dinner.”

We were shown the dining room, but were surprised to find only the President waiting for us at a large table with forty-two chairs, yet only three place settings at one end. Once again he embraced us and ushered us to our seats. Servers came in and put platters of savory food before us: taloos in sauce, a salad of purple leaves and pink wyrd, tak muffins, and a white fish baked in gwarg butter. Already on the table was the ubiquitous bowl of Miki nuts. I took one of the fish and a little bit of everything else. We ate the tasty food. I found the Miki nuts both nourishing, crunchy and with a taste akin to hazelnuts. I knew not to talk until the president burped and sighed to show satisfaction with the repast.

Then Mawgri pulled out the envelope and handed it to Komplas. “Nineteen pages. Unfortunately, we weren’t able to transfer the photographic images from the camera, but I can do that in my ship tomorrow and dispatch the book to you.”

“That’s fine,” the President said with a touch of weariness in his voice and laid the envelope on a nearby table and then picked up a book from the table. “I have something for you, Ambassador. It’s a copy of The Words of Kandi. It is in Putkeen, of course, since there are no translations into other languages, but I know you are learning the language.”

“Thank you, sir. I am honored.”

“I decided to have no others to dinner tonight because I didn’t want to have to explain this exchange. Like Sacacon, I think it is prudent to keep this ecclesiastical revelation to ourselves until the war ends.”
Mawgri said, “Are there any further reports from the battles?”

The President grinned and said, “Yes, both invasion fleets are heading home. They’ve taken a beating and realized that invasion is no longer possible.”

“And the secret flotilla of seaplanes?”

“They have struck and the submarines have launched their missiles. However, the results are not entirely known because night came shortly after the attack. Tomorrow we’ll send reconnaissance planes to photograph the results. We do know that fires are burning in all six coastal cities. Our forces sank a number of ships in all the ports and destroyed airplanes and vehicles.”

Mawgri stood and said, “President, we know you are busy and need your rest, so we’ll go now. Expect that dispatch shortly.”

Komplas smiled, but I felt his mind had already returned to his hopes and worries for his country. I stood and said, “Thank you again for the book, sir. I will tell the citizens of Sol that Putkwyz has two courageous leaders, you and Sacacon.”

He stood and said, “Ambassador Malcolm, it was a pleasure to meet you. Good luck on your mission. You are in the best hands possible with Mawgri.”

He spoke truer words than he (or I) knew.

End of Chapter 11
 
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Sunday, May 8, 2011

One True Love 33

12



What was the meaning

Of all that former crap

Compared to the smooth

energy

of our total union?



Did we really need

The pain and void

To recognize what

We had been missing?

 
"12, What was the meaning" was first published in Two Wholes Make It Total, 1978.  The persona wonders if one has to suffer and flounder before recognizing the new true love.
 
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Sunday, May 1, 2011

PutKwyz, Ch.10 "Over the Ocean"



10



Over the Ocean


Like a shadow, Mawgri’s spaceship, a shiny, round oblong of metal, descended silently and hovered just feet from the lip in front of the cave. To any observers, the mountain would have seemed to be smoking a silver cigar as the craft seemed to be hanging off the lip of a bald, bearded man. A hatch opened and steps slid silently out to me. I stepped aboard. The hatch closed behind me.

A hairy Stuwkreen attendant led me to my berth, a spacious room with its own bath and office areas set off from the bed and entertainment area—the kind of room normally reserved for diplomats or officers or paying passengers. I looked in the closet and found my luggage stacked neatly. I set my backpack next to the pile.

My communicator trilled, and I pulled it in front of my face and flipped it open. On the screen was Mawgri’s beautiful face smiling broadly. So I wouldn’t miss any meaning, he said slowly in Stuwkreen, “[We are not due in Kunwyz for some time, but there are things you should know. Why don’t you clean up, change into the ambassador’s uniform hanging in your closet and then come to the communication room? I’ll wait here.]”

“[Ok. I’ll be there in half an hour.]” My reply was also in Stuwkreen and even slower than his speech as I tried to make sure of my words. We both clicked off.

Although I was a native-speaker of English, I had learned Spanish, French, Russian and Chinese. On Mars, Luna and Earth, those languages allowed me to speak to almost everyone who was educated. In the Za system, I was learning Putkeen and Stuwkreen almost simultaneously, which was necessary when communicating long distances or through machines. Face to face the ATI made everything simple.

When I, fresh and wearing the powder blue and mauve uniform of a diplomat, entered the communications room, Mawgri spun around in his chair, rose and hugged me. “Finally . . . it seems like weeks since I saw you.”

“It was actually less than a day.”

“Ah, but what a day! Come here. Look at the screen.”

The large digital screen showed a bird’s eye view of a triangle of islands in a blue ocean. In the ocean were also ships maneuvering, black ovals with white wakes. On the island smoke was rising from various points. Then I noticed small winged shapes that were flying in the air over the islands and the ships. Small eruptions were happening both on the land of the islands and in the blue of the sea. I thought I might be watching a video game. “What is it?”

“It’s a fleet of Radimeer attacking the nearest islands belonging to Saca. The anticipated war has begun. I’ll zoom in closer.”

The camera zoomed in until we could make out buildings on the island and see the Radimeer bombers swooping low, the green egg of Radimeer painted clearly on their wings. When bombs exploded, the fiery blasts were visible.

“When did it begin? And how?”

“Last night, Radimeer’s planes and ships struck first. Since then the fighting has been raging.

“Yesterday Radimeer’s armored columns overran the coastal half of Polimeer and began attacking the island half. Radimeer also took over Winimeer without a fight. Its ally Ladimeer forced Cosimeer to capitulate. Sobimeer is fighting, trying to hold out against the two larger states.”

“Who is winning this battle? What are the islands called?”

“They are called Milisaca because they were settled by Milimeen from the east thousands of years ago before they became part of the Saca Empire. Hundreds of years ago, Saceen settled on the islands. The Saceen dominated, and their language became the official language. The majority has genetic links to Radimeen, but linguistically, culturally and politically they are linked to Saca and became part of the empire during the last century.

“Who is winning the battle is hard to tell. The Radimeen gained the initial advantage by attacking without warning. They have blockaded ports on the farthest island and are bombing and strafing and shelling airbases and ports on the other two islands. Everything is confusion. Civilians are being herded to safety while the military is trying to mount counterattacks against the Radimeen fleet.”

“What has Sacacon done?”

“He has sent his main battle fleet against that of the invaders. And he is sending an armada of heavy bombers against them. However, the ships will need three days to arrive. The bombers left the mainland an hour ago, so will arrive over the enemy in four hours.”

“Our accountants have been keeping score.” He flipped open his communicator and tapped a button. He asked questions and listened and wrote a list on a small pad. When he had finished the phone call, he tore off the top page and passed it to me. “Here’s the damage.”

The list in Stuwkreen translated as follows:



[Losses         Saca        Radimeer

SHIPS

Aircraft carrier 0            0

Battleship         1            0

Cruiser             2            0

Destroyer         4            2

Cutter               2            0

Patrol craft        8            0

Submarine         1            3

Freighter            12          0

AIRCRAFT

Bombers            25          39

Fighters              42          38

Transports          23          0

VEHICLES

Tanks                 5            0

Trucks                31          0

Buses                  8            0

Cars                   12           0]



After running down the list, I said, “Radimeer’s forces seem to be winning.”

“Yes, initially, of course, because they had surprise on their side. But you’ll notice that most of the losses for Saca are defensive losses. A defender can absorb more losses than an attacker can. An attacker must seize territory—always costly. A defender must merely keep the enemy at bay. None of Radimeer’s main forces have made contact with Saca’s. And the perimeter forces that have come in contact have been hurt, so Radimeer must shift perimeter forces around to shore up the front.”

“Plus, Radimeer has three fronts going: Milisaca, Polimeer, and Sobimeer.”

A crewman came forward and handed Mawgri a message. Mawgri read it quickly and looked at me. “Make those four fronts. Kunwyz is being attacked also.”

Mawgri sat down and input new coordinates for the digital viewer. The screen faded and then came back. Once again it showed black shapes with white wakes in a blue ocean; once again it showed three islands, but these ran in a string from east to west. The viewer zoomed in to show the western island and the middle island, both of which were under attack. Two fleets were attacking.

The viewer zoomed in closer, and I could see the green egg of Radimeer on the airplanes attacking the middle island. The viewer shifted west, but those attacking airplanes had not the green egg, but a gold diamond on their wings.

I said, “Whose planes have gold diamonds?”

“Ladimeer’s. Its main fleet is attacking the westernmost of the three Windy Islands.”

“Does Kunwyz have a naval force?”

“Not an offensive one. They do have a defensive fleet, but once again surprise is on Radimeer’s side. But now that we know Radimeer has opened four fronts, three of them by sea, we also know that it cannot have many naval reserves left. It’s gambling everything on surprise and winning quickly with overwhelming force.

“How can Sobimeer continue to resist when it has borders with Radimeer and Ladimeer?”

Mawgri input more coordinates, and the screen shifted again. This time it showed the southern end of the continent Luka that Radimeer dominated. With a digital pencil, Mawgri highlighted the border of Sobimeer, and said, “You see . . . there is a tall mountain range separating Sobimeer from both Radimeer and Ladimeer. The only pass is between Ladimeer and Sobimeer, and that pass is well-fortified, so any force attempting entry that way must expect heavy losses. Then as the mountain range recedes in Radimeer, there is a deep water bay, which is the only route that Radimeer’s forces can use to attack directly, but I doubt if it has enough amphibious forces left to mount a naval attack, which would also be costly. Besides, Radimeer doesn’t fear Sobimeer. It knows that if Polimeer falls, Sobimeer will probably concede. Now that Cosimeer has surrendered, Ladimeer could march its armies through the smaller country and try to attack Sobimeer along the coast, but that coastal strip is narrow and also well defended, and it will take weeks for Ladimeer to position its forces and begin an invasion. So . . . I think that as long as Polimeer holds out, Sobimeer will stay in the fight. The longer both stay in, the greater strain will be placed on Radimeer’s forces.”

“Seeing it on a screen makes it seem like a movie, but I know that below us on the planet, Putkurs are fighting and dying and suffering. Can’t Stuwkreen intervene and stop it?”

“We have the capacity to do so, but our policy is to influence more than intercede. For instance, this ship carries one laser cannon, and we could attack from a height that renders us impregnable from counterattacks. I could descend over the Radimeer fleet and take out the fleet ship by ship until Radimeer surrendered, but such is forbidden by the charter of the federation.”

“Is there nothing we can do?”

“Have faith. Remember that Kunwyz and Saca have an edge in technology, particularly in computer technology and aircraft engineering. Let’s wait to see what happens by the end of the day.”

After instructing his crew to send him hourly reports, Mawgri and I went to his quarters, which were about the same size and luxury as mine. I said, “Why did you have me dress as an ambassador?’

“For that is what you will be for as long as you are in the Za System: an ambassador from the Sol System. I know you can play the role. You will be given respect wherever you go on any planet. Sacacon agrees with me.”

“Yes, I’ll be an ambassador.”

“A deliciously beautiful ambassador,” he said and smiled his enchanting smile.

“As long as you think so.”

After a lingering embrace that revealed how important the touch of one was to the other, we entered into a game of rubostio, and so fought our own fantasy war while the real war raged below.

At the end of an hour, Mawgri’s communicator trilled, and he took the call. After clicking off, he said, “Radimeer continues to attack on all fronts, and dozens of transport craft are approaching behind the battle fleets. However, Kunwyz has launched its interceptor aircraft and attack aircraft against the two enemy fleets. Soon Radimeer and Ladimeer will feel the wrath of the defenders.”

On the three-dimensional game board, Mawgri and I maneuvered to standstill. On the digital screen and in blood-letting actuality, the contest below on the planet surged back and forth.

After two hours, a new report indicated that Kunwyz’s defenders were inflicting heavy damage on the attackers: planes were falling out of the sky as if the battle were a fireworks display of explosions and streamers, and ships were sinking.

In rubostio, Mawgri attacked and sacrificed some pieces to create openings that he could exploit. I fought him off and kept my emperor safe.

The third report said that Saca’s heavy bombers were approaching Radimeer’s fleet, and that action over the islands had receded. Radimeer was regrouping for a final blow before invasion.

Mawgri’s sacrifice had been too heavy, so I was able to counterattack with some success and chased his emperor into a defensive position. Now I attacked while Mawgri defended.

The fourth report announced more promising results. Saca’s heavy bombers had bypassed Radimeer’s battle fleet and instead had concentrated on the fleet of troop transports, using smart bombs to hit one after another of the slow converted freighters, each carrying at least 5,000 heavily armed troopers. Kunwyz’s aircraft and navy had blunted the invasion of their islands; they were also attacking troop transports with their attack planes. Polimeer and Sobimeer continued to fight on and were inflicting losses on the enemy. Events were turning although the situation remained desperate on all fronts.

Mawgri and I had both now exhausted our forces. We looked at each other across the tiered board, we smiled, and for the first time I hadn’t lost. Mawgri said, “Stalemate.”

Then he had some food delivered and turned on his room’s video screen and asked accounting to send new results. On the screen came the following list.



[Allied Federations Meer Union

Losses              Saca       Kun.     Pol.-Sob.     Rad.     Lad.

SHIPS

Aircraft carrier   0            0           0                 0           0

Battleship           1            0           0                 0           0

Cruiser               2            0           1                 0           0

Destroyer           4            2           5                 6           3

Cutter                 2            3           5                 0           0

Patrol craft          10          12         17               0           0

Submarine           1            1           1                 5           2

Freighter              14          8           7                27          9

AIRCRAFT

Bombers              37         28          25              104        53

Fighters                47         22          26              98          63

Transports            33         31          39             58           0

VEHICLES

Tanks                   7           5            72             47           6

Trucks                  38         26          102           15           6

Buses                    9           7            29             0             0

Cars                      22         19          105           6             2]



Mawgri drew with his digital pencil to circle four areas of the list. “These are good for the allies,” he said. “These freighters sunk mean that around 200,000 invasion troops have been lost. These air transports lost mean that Radimeer tried a parachute drop, but the transports didn’t make it. What we don’t know is if they were shot down before or after they had dropped their troops. The bombers and fighters lost add up to the force of two aircraft carriers. And the pilots went down over the sea or in enemy territory and will not be easily recovered, so the attacking forces have been depleted. Only Sobimeer and Polimeer have been engaged by land forces, so that is why their vehicle losses are so heavy, but what the table doesn’t show is that many of their vehicles were civilian while all of Radimeer’s are military. There is hope.”

Hope took us to a late lunch, after which Mawgri established communication with the Kunwyz government to find out if it was still advisable for us to land. He told me, “All public gatherings are off, but they, of course, want the supplies that my ships are carrying, so we will land. You and I will have a private meeting with the president of the confederation.”

End of Chapter 10

War has begun.  A struggle for the "last best hop of Putkurs" has commenced.

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