Sunday, August 29, 2010

Young, black and enslaved



Phillis Wheatley




Phoebus remained her true god, the flambeau brought with

Her from Africa when she was ten years old.

In the dark of slavery, she was—without a doubt—

Lucky, for her master nurtured the flame of curiosity;

Lucky, for her Boston family illumined her—

In the home—with the edification of the word,

So she bloomed as a bright and reflective

Writer. Her poems sparkled with light.

Her poems illuminated those who read them.

Even Washington, warmed, beckoned her to Mount Vernon,

And she came and they talked unto emblazonment.

Then, after that talk, he allowed black soldiers to be

Let to serve their country, and at death, he freed his slaves.

Everything did not stay sublime: her husband passed, so darkened her last

Years of toil; she died only thirty-one.

2010
 
"Phillis Wheatley" is an acrostic poem. She is the beginning of African-American literature.  What I really enjoy about her story is how her bright intelligence put to lie the idea that black people were inherently inferior, convincing the father of our country that someday we all would truly be equal.
 
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Saturday, August 28, 2010

A polysyllogism about writing

THE WRITING SORITES

Faulkner reads Shakespeare, including Macbeth with its speech “Life is a tale told by an idiot, full of sound and fury, signifying nothing.”

Faulkner writes his many books, including The Sound and the Fury.

Marquez and Rushdie read Faulkner.

Marquez and Rushdie are influenced by Faulkner.

Marquez and Rushdie write like Faulkner, including respectively the books One Hundred Years of Solitude and Midnight’s Children.

I read Marquez and Rushdie, staying up past midnight.

I am influenced by Marquez and Rushdie.

I am influenced by Faulkner.

I write like Marquez and Rushdie, spending much time in solitude.

I write like Faulkner, with much sound and fury.

I signify nothing.

I am an idiot.
2009
 
This is a humorous poem poking fun at me.
 
("Sorites Paradox"


First published Fri Jan 17, 1997; substantive revision Mon Aug 15, 2005

The sorites paradox is the name given to a class of paradoxical arguments, also known as little-by-little arguments, which arise as a result of the indeterminacy surrounding limits of application of the predicates involved. For example, the concept of a heap appears to lack sharp boundaries and, as a consequence of the subsequent indeterminacy surrounding the extension of the predicate ‘is a heap’, no one grain of wheat can be identified as making the difference between being a heap and not being a heap. Given then that one grain of wheat does not make a heap, it would seem to follow that two do not, thus three do not, and so on. In the end it would appear that no amount of wheat can make a heap. We are faced with paradox since from apparently true premises by seemingly uncontroversial reasoning we arrive at an apparently false conclusion.


This phenomenon at the heart of the paradox is now recognised as the phenomenon of vagueness (see the entry on vagueness). Once identified, vagueness can be seen to be a feature of syntactic categories other than predicates, nonetheless one speaks primarily of the vagueness of predicates. Names, adjectives, adverbs and so on are only susceptible to paradoxical sorites reasoning in a derivative sense.


Sorites arguments of the paradoxical form are to be distinguished from multi-premise syllogisms (polysyllogisms) which are sometimes also referred to as sorites arguments. Whilst both polysyllogisms and sorites paradoxes are chain-arguments, the former need not be paradoxical in nature and the latter need not be syllogistic in form. --Stanford Encyclopedia of Philosophy: http://plato.stanford.edu/entries/sorites-paradox/)


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Friday, August 27, 2010

Buck must find two missing college students Ch. 4



ENCOMIENDA

Chapter 4



The next morning before I left for Everglades City, I wrote a note to Ruben. “There’s a letter to one of the missing boys from his father. See what you can find out about the father: socioeconomic status, political views, lifestyle dangers, etc. Let’s make sure that some of Venezuela’s politics hasn’t spilled over onto us. Caridad can fill you in on some of the details. File is in its folder: Concepción – missing person.”

I drove leisurely across the Trail. I drove slowly, not only because the two-lane blacktop undulates and has potholes but also because I wanted to put my mind into the two college boys’ minds. They were on Christmas break, free to do what they wanted, going to Tampa to see a couple good-looking girls from school. I imagined Nano driving and Paulie talking about this and that: maybe the college football team’s national championship prospects, maybe professors they liked or didn’t like, maybe how many bases they could get to with the girls, maybe about what it was like back home in their respective countries – the upheavals in Venezuela, the prosperity of a freer Mexico – maybe how different or alike Miami was to their home countries. For me, driving is conducive to thinking.

However, I was stopped before long by a lone figure on the highway: a girl hitchhiking. I have a policy of not picking up hitchhikers, but I had been cruising along thinking about what had happened to a couple missing offspring and here on the road was somebody’s offspring. I didn’t know if she was missing, but she was doing a very dangerous thing.

As I passed her, I could see that she was very young, maybe another college student or younger. She was thin and dressed for the road as if she’d had some experience on it. She wore walking boots, loose blue jeans, an orange sweatshirt, sunglasses and a floppy floral-print hat to keep the sun off. She had a backpack bulging with unknown items. She was holding a cardboard sign that read “Ft. Myers.”

I don’t pick up hitchhikers for several reasons. First, they often smell from being unwashed and on the road for days; driving is not pleasant while the nose is being assaulted by distracting, acrid odors. Second, if the hiker is high on some substance, then one has to sit with an altered consciousness in the passenger seat; depending on the substance swallowed or inhaled, the hiker could erupt into frantic discourse or sink into drooling fantasy. Neither state makes for pleasant conversation. Third, hitchhikers can be moochers, begging not only for rides but also for food, drink, smokes and money. Most importantly, the hiker could be as predatory as any driver. He or she could be participating in a scam or operating as a ruse for a holdup. Drivers have to be very cautious.

But my conscience made me stop; I didn’t want to leave a young woman in jeopardy by the side of the road. I pulled over and in my rearview mirror watched her run toward my Z3, her backpack swaying from side to side. Before she reached me, I opened my door and stepped out and held my hand up for her to stop.

She stopped and stared at me. I’m not a small man. I waved her forward and she stepped in front of me. My actions alerted her that I wasn’t an ordinary driver.

She said, “Are you a cop?”

I said, “I’m willing to give you a ride, but first I want to make sure you’re decent.”

She smiled and said nothing.

She didn’t smell bad. She had bathed recently and her clothes were fresh. She wasn’t wearing perfume, but she smelled newly scrubbed with soap. She’d passed the first test.

I said, “Take off your glasses, so I can see your eyes.”

Her eyes were light brown with clear white pupils and irises of normal diameter, neither the dilated black holes of amphetamines nor the pinhead dots of opiates. She said, “Well?”

I said, “All right, I’m going your way. Do you have any weapons on you?”

She wriggled out of the nylon backpack and swung it down. She ripped the Velcro-secured top open and said, “Just this claw hammer . . .” The hammer was a beauty; red wooden handle and black steel head. She pulled her hat off and pulled out a long pearl-tipped, silver hatpin from the band. “and this hatpin . . .” She stuck the hatpin back into the band and patted her right pocket with her right hand. “and a pocketknife in my pocket.”

“Let me see the knife.”

She took it out and opened it. It was also pretty: an ivory handle engraved with an eagle inlaid with turquoise and obsidian and coral and armed with a three-inch steel blade with one keen edge, perfectly legal. She said, “It’s my dad’s.”

“Ok, put it back. I guess you’re good to go. Stuff your backpack behind the seat. My trunk is full.”

When she had pulled off the hat, her long, shiny black hair had tumbled down and draped around her back and shoulders. She picked up the pack, resealed the top and put it and her hat behind the seats. Then she slid in and I got in after her.

As I put the car in gear and rolled onto the blacktop, she said, “Are you going all the way to Fort Myers?”

“Maybe. I’m not sure.”

“Why aren’t you sure? Don’t you know where you’re going?”

“No, I don’t.”

“Why don’t you know?”

I looked at her. She was looking right into my eyes. I concluded that this young person was traveling purposefully, not necessarily fleeing. I said, “I tell you what. First, answer some questions for me. And when I’m finished, you can ask me anything you want.”

“Ok.”

“How old are you?”

“Fifteen.”

“Shouldn’t you be in school?”

“School is pretty boring.”

“Do you live in Fort Myers?”

“My mother lives in Fort Myers.”

“So, you’re going to visit your mother?”

“Sort of.”

“Does your father live in Miami?”

“Yes.”

“Your parents are divorced?”

“Yes.”

“You live with your father?”

“Sometimes.”

“Who has custody?”

“Mom.”

“So, you live in Fort Myers.”

“Officially.”

“Doesn’t your mother have something to say about that.”

“She has custody, but not control.”

“Who has control?”

“Me.” She smiled.

“Why are you on the road?”

“To go from one place to the other.”

“Ok, smarty pants, I mean why didn’t you take a plane or a bus?”

“I prefer making my own way and saving the ticket fare. Instead of the airlines having the sixty-nine dollars, I have it.”

“Do your parents know you’ve left?’

“Dad will figure it out tonight. And Mom will know it when I get there.”

“So, you do this often?”

“Often enough.”

“Don’t your parents worry?”

“Sure. But they’ve gotten used to it.”

“You should call your Dad to let him know you’ve left.”

“Why?”

“It’s called being considerate.”

She glared at me a minute and said, “All right.” She pulled a cell phone out of her left front pocket, opened it and punched on the set number. I could hear a phone ringing faintly.

Speaking into the phone, she said, “Hi, Dad, I’m heading back to Mom’s.”

. . . .

“No, I’m hitching.”

. . . .

“No, I’ve already got a ride.”

. . . .

“With some guy.”

She handed me the phone. “He wants to talk to you.”

I pulled onto the shoulder of the road and stopped and took the phone. “Hello”

A male voice said, “This is Iris’s father Bill Dabney. Who are you?”

“My name is Buck Jaspers. I’m a private detective heading toward Naples on a case. I saw your daughter thumbing rides and was concerned for her. I thought she’d be safer with me than someone else.”

“Can I have your driver’s license number?”

“No, I don’t give out that information to people I don’t know. But if you want to check on my validity, call Lieutenant Horatio Jenks with Metro Homicide. He’ll vouch for me.”

“Will you take her all the way to Fort Myers? I’ll pay the extra mileage.”

“Don’t worry about that. This case may take me that far anyway.”

“She’s not a bad kid, just very headstrong.”

“I’ve learned that already.”

“Well, let me talk to her.”

I passed the phone back to Iris.

She said, “Dad, I’ll be fine. Goodbye.”

I said, “Now, call your mother.”

“She won’t be worrying. She doesn’t even know I’m coming.”

“Then promise me you’ll call her when we stop for lunch.”

“Ok, I promise. Geez, if I’d known I was getting into a car with another parent, I’d have waited for another ride.”

I laughed.

She said, “Are you really a private dick?”

“We like to be called private investigator.”

“What kind of case are you working on?”

“Missing persons.”

“Who’s missing?”

“I’d rather not say.”

“Maybe I’ve seen ‘em. Did they go down the Trail?”

“Yes.”

“What kind of car were they driving?”

“A Toyota Samurai.”

“Those are cute. But I’ve never gotten a ride in one. Been in plenty of trucks and vans and lots of cars.”

“Ever had any bad experiences?”

“Of course. There’s lots of goofy people out here.”

“What was your bad experience?”

“Been more than one. Once I got picked up by a guy that was really drunk. I didn’t realize how drunk until I was in and he was driving. He kept weaving and drifting. Here and there. Over the yellow line. Onto the shoulder. I’d have to yell and grab the wheel and get us back on line. Finally, he passed out altogether, so I stopped the car, shoved him into the passenger seat and drove us all the way to Miami. He never woke up. When I was close to Dad’s area, I pulled over, turned the car off and left him sleeping on the shoulder on the turnpike. I figured a trooper would wake him sooner or later.

“A lot of guys ask for sex, but I never let ‘em have any. A guy tried to rape me last year. I stuck him with the hatpin and told him I’d injected him with poison. We were almost to Naples, so he drove straight to the hospital and went into the emergency room. He was yelling and screaming that I had tried to kill him. ‘This bitch is a witch!’ I got my stuff and ran. I suppose he was pretty angry when he found out he just had a pinprick.”

I laughed. I said, “Iris in control.”

“Right.”

“You seem pretty bright. Too bad you don’t like school.”

“I like learning. I keep up. In fact, I’ve got my books in my backpack. That’s why it’s so stuffed.”

“How do you know what the assignments are?”

“I call the teachers and they send me text messages.” She pulled out her cell phone and tapped a few keypads. “See.” She held the cell phone in front of my face so I could see the screen. On the screen were the words “Read Chapter 10, ‘A Rebirth of Learning.’ Answer the questions at the end of the chapter.”

I said, “Did you read it?”

“Did. It’s about the Renaissance.”

“World history class?”

“Right.”

“Did you do the questions?”

“Did.” She tapped more keys and showed me the screen again. It read “Read ‘Julius Caesar’; write an essay discussing the virtues of a republic versus a dictatorship.”

“Does that refer to the play by Shakespeare?”

“Does.”

“Did you write the essay?”

“Did. I’ll type it up when I get home.”

“Sounds like advanced placement classes.”

“Are.”

“So, you’re a little genius?”

“Words like ‘genius’ are useless. I’m just me. What about you? You seem pretty smart for a private d . . . investigator.”

“I have a college degree and I enjoy reading history.”

“What made you become a detective? Were you a policeman first?”

“It’s one thing I’m pretty good at. I was an MP in the military and while I was going to college, I worked as a security guard. My major is history; my minor is criminology.”

END of Chapter 4
 
Iris is patterned after my younger sister when she was a teenager.  She wasn't really wild; she just wasn't sure who was in charge of her, so felt free to roam.
 
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Tuesday, August 24, 2010

Cuba's poet and freedom fighter

Jose Marti


Simple Verse of José Martí



I’m a sincere man
From where the palm grows,1
And before I die I want
To scatter my verses from my soul.

1 Cuba


My verse is from a clear green
And from a bright red.
My verse is a wounded stag
That seeks shelter in the woods.


I have seen the injured eagle
Fly to the serene blue
And kill in its lair
The poisonous viper.


I come from all places
And to all places I go.
I am art inside the arts;
And in the woods, the woods.


The leopard has a pelt
In the dry, dun forest.
I have more than the leopard,
For I have a good friend.


I grow a white rose
In June as in January
For the true friend
Who gives me his honest hand.


And for the cruel who tear out
The heart that gives me life,
I don’t grow stinging nettles;
I grow a white rose.


I want when I die --
No homeland, but no master --2
To have in my tomb a sprig
Of flowers and a flag.

2 Expatriate of Cuba, but free from Spain’s tyranny.


Don’t put me in the dark
To die like a traitor.
I am good, and as good,
I will die facing the sun.


Sometimes when I’m happy
Like a simple schoolboy,
I think of the yellow canary
That has such black eyes.3

3 Symbolic reference to Spain (yellow) and the evil (black) that it has caused.


With the earth’s poor,
My die is cast.
The mountain stream
Pleases more than the sea.


I trembled once at the fence
At the vineyard’s entrance
When the foreign queen-brute
Bit my daughter’s brow.


If you see a mountain of spray,
It’s my verse you see;
My verse is a mountain,
And an open fan of feathers.


These verses are my translation, although I have to credit Federico Rodriguez who stimulated me to do the translations and gave me suggestions on tone and diction.  They have not been published before now.  Jose Marti for Cubans is like Thomas Paine or Thomas Jefferson or Patrick Henry or all three combined for Americans because Marti articulated the hopes and desires of the Cubans.  Marti is a hero to both expatriates in Miami and ironically to Fidelistas, although I doubt Marti would think highly of a totalitarian state, nor would he be tolerated there.  If Jose Marti were alive today, he would probably be imprisoned in Cuba for speaking and writing against the oppressive state.
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Friday, August 20, 2010

Buck must find two missing college students Ch. 3


Depictions of the encomienda system in the new world:
Clockwise: (1) Natives working for a conquistador; (2)
A Catholic priest giving Christianity to the natives. (3)
Cruelty by a conquistador to his native worker.

ENCOMIENDA


Chapter 3




After lunch I returned to the office and found a reply from janicep waiting in my inbox. It read, “Mr. Jaspers, I’m sorry to hear about the boys. The girls were hoping they’d make it up here. I’m Rhonda Jaro’s mother. She used my email while she and Melissa were here. I’ll call them tonight and let them know what happened. How do I know you’re legit? Can you fax me some ID at the following number?”

Rhonda had a cautious mother. That was a good thing. I copied my P.I. license on some letterhead paper and faxed it to the number she gave.

Then I gave Caridad Paulie’s letter. “I think this is from his father. Would you write a very tactful letter to let him know that his son is missing and that we’re trying to find him. In Spanish.”

About a half an hour later the office phone rang. Caridad buzzed me. “Buck, a Mrs. Jaro on the line for you.”

“Good. Thanks, Caridad.” I picked up the receiver, “Buck Jaspers speaking.”

“Ok, I guess you’re legit.” Her voice was raspy as if she was or had been a long-time cigarette smoker. “I’m very careful when it comes to my baby girl.”

“Is she your only child?”

“No, I’ve also got three hulking boys – or men, I should say – but she’s the baby.”

“Why’d you send her to school in Miami?”

“That was her idea. Her father died a few years ago and left us a house free and clear and a couple surprise insurance policies. So, I told her she was going to college anywhere she liked. She liked Miami.”

“Is she a good student?”

“Well, she’s smart enough, but I’m not sure how focused she is on her classes. She got all Bs last semester. I hear Miami’s a pretty crazy place.”

“Its reputation far exceeds the reality. The media make it seem a lot crazier than it is.” It was a bit of a lie, but I knew her mind needed easing. “Anyway, who is Melissa, a classmate?”

“Right. Melissa’s from Bradenton, so the two hit it off ‘cause they had the hometown in common.”

“Mrs. Jaro, I really appreciate your calling me. I would like to talk to the girls. Is that possible?”

“I guess so. Let me give you Rhonda’s number. You call her and she can decide whether to talk to you or not. Give me a half hour to talk to her first.”

I drank some water, got a road atlas off my shelf. On a tabloid-size sheet of paper, I photocopied the page with the map of South Florida from Tampa to Miami. With a light blue highlighter, I traced the route that we knew so far. South Bay Apartments to the Palmetto Expressway to Calle Ocho to the Tamiami Trail. At the juncture of the Trail, I wrote with a blue pen early morning, buys gas. Then I highlighted the Trail all the way to the turnoff on Highway 29 to Everglades City. Below Everglades City, I wrote stops for lunch at the Everglades Inn. Such visual devices are important to me; they help me focus.

Then I told Caridad to cut a check for Vlad for one day’s work. I know it was only half a day, but that’s because the students’ computers were easier to get into than we had expected. The process could’ve taken much longer, and what if he’d gotten a call for other work while he was doing my bidding? Besides, if I pay him fully, he’ll come the next time I call: free-market reciprocity. Ben would’ve approved.

I looked up encomienda in Webster’s dictionary. It wasn’t there. I looked it up in a Spanish dictionary. The definition wasn’t very helpful: "In colonial America, a commission from the King to a conquistador." I went on the Internet to Bartleby.com. An explanation from the Columbia Encyclopedia read:

A system of tributory labor established in Spanish America. Developed as a means of securing an adequate and cheap labor supply, the encomienda was first used over the conquered Moors of Spain. Transplanted to the New World, it gave the conquistador control over the native populations by requiring them to pay tribute from their lands, which were “granted” to deserving subjects of the Spanish crown. The natives often rendered personal services as well. In return the grantee was theoretically obligated to protect his wards, to instruct them in the Christian faith, and to defend their right to use the land for their own subsistence. When first applied in the West Indies, this labor system wrought such hardship that the population was soon decimated. This resulted in efforts by the Spanish king and the Dominican order to suppress encomiendas, but the need of the conquerors to reward their supporters led to de facto recognition of the practice. The crown prevented the encomienda from becoming hereditary, and with the New Laws (1542) promulgated by Las Casas, the system gradually died out, to be replaced by the repartimiento and finally debt peonage. Similar systems of land and labor apportionment were adopted by other colonial powers, notably the Portuguese, the Dutch, and the French.


I printed the explanation, made a copy and added it to the file. I left the other copy on my desk.

Then I dialed Rhonda Jaro’s number. A young female voice answered. “Hello.”

“Rhonda Jaro?”

“Yes. Who’s this?”

“My name is Buck Jaspers. I’m a private investigator.”

“Yes, Mama said you’d call.”

“If it’s possible, I’d like to talk to you and your friend Melissa together.”

“We’re not allowed to have male guests in the dorm.”

At that point I remembered what college was like for most students – bland cafeteria food, no private transportation. “I tell you what, I’ll buy you and Melissa dinner tonight. We can talk then. What do you say?”

“Well, where would you take us?” She was probably thinking fast food.

“It’d have to be someplace quiet, so we could talk. Do you like Italian food?”

“Sure.”

“Ok. How ‘bout the Flamingo on Biscayne?”

“Sounds good.”

“Six o’clock?”

“Ok.”

“Is your dorm close to the Metrorail station?”

“Not too far.”

“Ok, I’ll pick you up there.”

“Wait. How will we know you?”

“I’ll be driving a blue BMW Z3 convertible.”

“Awesome.”


* * * *


They both squeezed into the passenger seat and got the seat belt around. They were smiling and laughing. Rhonda was a short, thin blonde with a round, happy face. Melissa was just as thin but six inches taller and a brunette. They were full of youthful energy; this night was just another adventure. They wore hip-hugging jeans and cotton pullovers.

And on the way to the restaurant, the damnedest thing happened. I’ve known people in this town that I haven’t seen for years even though we are no more than miles away from each other most of the time. But whom did we run into on the way down Dixie Highway: my partner Ruben, his wife Luli and their kids. I was cruising along with those two fresh-faced beauties, their hair whipping behind them, when I heard, “Bu-u-ck! Bu-u-ck!” Children’s voices screaming my name. I looked over and Ruben’s Buick had pulled up next to us. He and Luli grinned and waved and he gave me the thumb-up sign. His kids waved and yelled and pressed ketchup embossed kisses against the Plexiglas of their window. I knew I’d have to call him to explain; otherwise, he’d think I was robbing cradles for dates. I waved back and smiled.

The food at the Flamingo was just what the girls were hoping for, and they were primed to talk. Melissa had meatballs; Rhonda had chicken Parmesan; I had a pasta salad. They wanted to order wine, but I wouldn’t let them. They settled for iced tea.

Nevertheless, their stories about Nano and Paulie were more confirming than revealing. Rhonda had met Paulie at a party and he asked her out. Through him, she met Nano. She decided she liked Nano better than Paulie; Nano seemed more serious and dedicated. She introduced Melissa to them, hoping Paulie would like her. He did and she liked him. That led to the Christmas invitation. They were both surprised when the guys didn’t show. Their narrative confirmed that Nano was intelligent, highly focused; Paulie, fun-loving, adventurous.

I asked them if they had dated anyone else.

Rhonda said, “Of course. I for one am not looking to be chained down before I get a Bachelor’s degree.”

Melissa said, “Me neither.”

“Were any of the other guys serious?”

Melissa said, “You mean like jealous or obsessive?”

“Yeah, like that.”

“I hope not. Because we weren’t.”

Then Rhonda’s tone changed, revealing that maybe for Nano she had held higher hopes despite the declarations of independence. “Mr. Jaspers, what do you think happened to them? Do you think they’re alive?”

“I don’t know, but I’m going to find out.”

For two skinny women, they put away a lot of food, including a dessert of ice cream and cake. I dropped them off at their dorm afterward and they said they’d be willing to do it again. I told them they were sweet and drove away.

As soon as I got inside my apartment, I called Ruben. “Ruben, it’s not what you think.”

END of Chapter 3
 
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Thursday, August 19, 2010

The meek shall inherit



ROYAL PALMS



Three storms in a month
And still you stand
Erect shafts against the glowing
Sky. So I bow
To you. During the storms
I saw how your tensile strength
Bent flexibly against
The winds that pushed
Down larger, stiffer trees and
Broke their limbs. You gave up
Fronds and seeds whipped
From your tractability,
But that is all. I imagine that
This is how the meek
Shall inherit, their bending and
Giving before the blows break them –
And their bounding back. The earth
Is yours, O, resilient palm,
Prescient of the supple
Saviors of the earth!

2006

"Royal Palms" was published first in the Ann Arbor Review, 2007;  it was included in the unpublished An Operose Hierodule of the Muse, 2008.
 
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Wednesday, August 18, 2010

another story from the Apochrypha retold

Two oil paintings of Susanah



(APOCRYPHAL) SUSANAH



Daniel knew how to make
The evildoers pay,
Knew how to shake
The truth from what they say.


Susanah young and sweet
Like many a temptress
Walks on innocent feet
Into an evil fortress.


The two old satyrs
Have her in their reach
But their grasp splatters
Against her honest breach


Of what she did not know.
Repulsed, reviled, they vow
She free shall not go.
They conspire only now


They’ll go to council high,
Accuse of what they could not have
Say the flash of thigh
Drew their attention to a knave


With whom she lay
And saw her open to the beast
And let him have his way
To taste her carnal feast.


So the council drew her nigh
Laid the charges at her feet.
Aghast, she could just deny,
Say she was yet discreet.


The judges to their peers assent:
The accusers, respected men,
Not known to lie with sin;
The girl, voluptuous, then


To the eye if naught more
Could easily, they thought
Have tempted any poor
Youth who might have caught


Himself within her net
Of shapely nubile flesh
And her eyes and lips wet
With lust and all so fresh.


Then Daniel stepped forth,
Said he could solve the mess.
Take the accusers henceforth
To separate rooms to confess


How thus all came to be.
He groped for details not
Yet conspired. Let them see
A different scene hot


Beneath a tree. What’s this?
One says fruit; one says fir.
Let us these charges dismiss:
The old goats are one liar


Inside two cloaks. Here stands
An innocent blessed of the Lord.
The men were the evil hands
Caught by their own word.


[Not so fast. I think more
May appear if we look.
The girl was no whore
We can write in the book,



But even at her tender age
She had wiles enough
To know that in a stage
She could play a rough




And tumble kind of girl
To draw old men there
And make them a world
Un-thought of where




They trod so many years.
Maybe she wanted a small
Thing or money or appear
To be their desire’s thrall.




No matter. She played,
They hungered and grasped,
She drew back and prayed,
They angered and lashed.]

2006
 
"(Apochryphal) Susanah" was included in the unpublished An Operose Hierodule of the Muse, 2008.  This topic of the young girl seduced (or is it the old men seduced?) is controversial.  Lolita by Vladimir Nabokov most famously studies this theme, and he does it in such a way, so the reader is unsure of who is in charge, the older man or the girl. The recent movie An Education also delves into this theme.  Flash!  Just this morning I was listening to Miami's classical music station as I wrote, right after 6 a.m.Garrison Keillor comes on with a few moments of poetry and discusses events in literature that happened on this date.  It turns out that Lolita was published on this date in 1955; Graham Greene, the British writer, gave it a good review, but others condemned it as pornography.   In light of new research indicating that American girls are reaching puberty at an earlier age, this theme may be revisited. NOTE: I generally have a cup of coffee (it is in my hand now) with breakfast before I write. Keillor also told that Honoré de Blazac, the 19th century French fiction writer, died on this date; reportedly, Balzac drank 40-50 cups of black coffee every day.  His heart gave out at 51. Below are items related to this blog.